Fix a few typos and sentences that are hard to parse.

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Christian Brueffer 2007-04-06 16:20:48 +00:00
parent be6b165de7
commit 5ad1385ebd
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=29947

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@ -150,8 +150,8 @@
<step>
<title>Create a new kernel configuration file.</title>
<para>You can remove all of the SCSI, firewire, and USB
device drivers. Paralells provides a virtual network
<para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB
device drivers. Parallels provides a virtual network
adapter used by the <option>ed</option> driver, so
all other network devices except for
<option>ed</option> and <option>miibus</option> can be
@ -281,8 +281,8 @@ Domain-0 0 256 1 r----- 54452.9</sc
<para>Put the config file <filename>xmexample1.bsd</filename>
into <filename>/etc/xen/</filename> and modify the related
entries about where stores the kernel and the disk image,
it should look like this:</para>
entries about where the kernel and the disk image are stored.
It should look like the following:</para>
<programlisting>kernel = "/opt/kernel-current"
memory = 256
@ -295,12 +295,11 @@ extra += ",boot_single"
extra += ",kern.hz=100"
extra += ",vfs.root.mountfrom=ufs:/dev/xbd769a"</programlisting>
<para><filename>mdroot-7.0.bz2</filename> should be
uncompressed</para>
<para>The <filename>mdroot-7.0.bz2</filename> file should be
uncompressed.</para>
<para>And also in the <filename>kernel-current</filename>,
fix the __xen_guest section to add the VIRT_BASE that
Xen 3.0.3 requires, </para>
<para>Next, the __xen_guest section in <filename>kernel-current</filename>
needs to be altered to add the VIRT_BASE that Xen 3.0.3 requires:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput><command>objcopy</command> <filename>kernel-current</filename> -R __xen_guest</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput><command>perl</command> -e 'print "LOADER=generic,GUEST_OS=freebsd,GUEST_VER=7.0,XEN_VER=xen-3.0,BSD_SYMTAB,VIRT_BASE=0xC0000000\x00"' &gt; <filename>tmp</filename></userinput>