Avoid using "It was", but use a more explicit reference to the
version-guide article in the abstract of 5-roadmap. This way the text is a bit less confusing.
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<ulink url="&url.articles.version-guide;">
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<quote>Choosing the &os; Version That Is Right For You</quote>
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may be of interest. It was written in August 2005 (two and a
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half years later), and contains a section discussing how these
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may be of interest. The version-guide article was written in August 2005 (two and a
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half years later), and it contains a section discussing how these
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plans and events actually unfolded, as well as some lessons
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learned.</para>
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</abstract>
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