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Reword one paragraph slightly and fix minor grammar errors.

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Will Andrews 2001-12-03 01:21:29 +00:00
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commit 6004c1b397
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00 
svn path=/www/; revision=11328
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<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/index.xsl,v 1.15 2001/11/05 01:51:01 dd Exp $ -->
<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/index.xsl,v 1.16 2001/11/05 02:31:58 jkh Exp $ -->
<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform" version="1.0">
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<xsl:import href="news/includes.xsl"/>
<xsl:variable name="base" select="'.'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/index.xsl,v 1.15 2001/11/05 01:51:01 dd Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/index.xsl,v 1.16 2001/11/05 02:31:58 jkh Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="title" select="'The FreeBSD Project'"/>
<xsl:output type="html" encoding="iso-8859-1"
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<p>FreeBSD makes an ideal
<a href="{$base}/internet.html">Internet or Intranet</a>
server. It provides robust network services,
even under the heaviest of loads, and uses memory efficiently
to maintain good response times for hundreds, or even
thousands, of simultaneous user processes. Visit our
server. It provides robust network services under the heaviest
loads and uses memory efficiently to maintain good response
times for thousands of simultaneous user processes. Visit our
<a href="gallery/gallery.html">gallery</a> for examples of
FreeBSD powered applications and services.</p>
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for more information or write to: The FreeBSD Foundation,
7321 Brockway Dr. Boulder, CO. 80303. USA</p>
<p>Silicon Breeze have also sculpted and cast the BSD Daemon
<p>Silicon Breeze has also sculpted and cast the BSD Daemon
in metal and are now donating 15% of all proceeds from
these statuettes back to the FreeBSD Foundation. The complete
story and information on how to order their BSD Daemon is