- Use more accurate title for the foils so that the foilgroup look

better when rendered
- Comment out the foil for the missing chart
-

en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-dev-model.xml

@@ -1,12 +1,10 @@
 <!-- $FreeBSD$ -->
 
 <foilgroup id="freebsd-dev-model">
-
   <foil id="freebsd-dev-model-general">
-    <title>FreeBSD Development Model</title>
+    <title>FreeBSD Development Model - Overview</title>
 
     <itemizedlist>
-
       <listitem>FreeBSD development continues along two parallel
         branches; FreeBSD-CURRENT and FreeBSD-STABLE.</listitem>
 
@@ -21,16 +19,17 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </foil>
 
+<!-- FIXME: past the chart here
   <foil id="freebsd-dev-model-release-diagram">
     <title>FreeBSD Release Diagram</title>
 
     <para>Chart from releng paper goes here.</para>
 
   </foil>
-
+-->
 
   <foil id="freebsd-dev-model-organization">
-    <title>FreeBSD Development Model</title>
+    <title>FreeBSD Development Model - The Team</title>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>Thousands of developers around the world contribute
@@ -39,29 +38,27 @@
       <listitem>Only the <quote>committers</quote> have write access
         to the CVS repository.</listitem>
 
-      <listitem>324 total committers in FreeBSD (includes source,
+      <listitem>488 total committers in FreeBSD (includes source,
         documentation, and ports committers).</listitem>
 
-      <listitem>212 active committers to src/ in the last 12
+      <listitem>203 active committers to src/ (exlucind sys) in the last 12
         months.</listitem>
 
-      <listitem>165 active committers to src/sys in the last 12
+      <listitem>144 active committers to src/sys in the last 12
         months.</listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
   </foil>
 
   <foil id="freebsd-dev-model-bugs">
-    <title>FreeBSD Development Model</title>
+    <title>FreeBSD Development Model - Handling Bugs</title>
 
     <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>Users and external developers should submit bug fixes,
+      <listitem>Users and external developers do not have CVS acces, they
-        enhancements, or problem reports with GNATS.</listitem>
+	can submit bug fixes, enhancements, or problem reports using the
+	GNATS database.</listitem>
 
-      <listitem>Online submission forms, send-pr command installed by
+      <listitem>Online submission forms, <command>send-pr</command> command
-        default on FreeBSD systems, etc.</listitem>
+	installed by default on FreeBSD systems, etc.</listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
   </foil>
-
 </foilgroup>