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Spelling/grammar fixes: dehyphenate "easy-to-use", replace the second

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"easy-to-use" with "straightforward", and redo a sentence ending because
I think that ending a sentence with "to" counts as splitting an infinitive.
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Adam Weinberger 2005-12-29 07:53:52 +00:00
parent 7c3175b707
commit 688d8db013
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00 
svn path=/www/; revision=26728
1 changed files with 6 additions and 6 deletions
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en/gnome/index.xsl
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@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.81 2005/12/29 07:34:46 marcus Exp $ -->
<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.82 2005/12/29 07:47:57 adamw Exp $ -->
<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform"
xmlns:rdf="http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#"
@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<xsl:import href="includes.xsl"/>
<xsl:variable name="base" select="'..'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.81 2005/12/29 07:34:46 marcus Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.82 2005/12/29 07:47:57 adamw Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="section" select="'gnome'"/>
<xsl:variable name="title" select="'FreeBSD GNOME Project'"/>
@ -101,12 +101,12 @@
<p>GNOME is a complete desktop environment, and a
comprehensive suite of applications. In GNOME,
everything is easy-to-use, attractive, powerful,
and works the way you expect it to.</p>
everything is easy to use, attractive, powerful,
and works the way you expect.</p>
<p>The major components of GNOME are the
<a href="http://www.gnome.org">GNOME desktop</a>, an
easy-to-use window-based desktop environment, and the
<a href="http://www.gnome.org">GNOME desktop</a>, a
straightforward window-based desktop environment, and the
<a href="http://developer.gnome.org">GNOME development
platform</a>, a collection of application-development
tools and libraries.</p>