From 69283cbdb8aa602662d8c8d9a42376592dcc9a33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sat, 6 Sep 2003 07:25:21 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] In SAP section:

- Add some missing application tags.
- Some rewordings (fixes, contraction, s/I/We/ etc.)
- Add a link to install-diff-media section where needed.
---
 .../books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml          | 15 ++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml
index 01090b3c25..33c3ffe676 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml
@@ -1127,7 +1127,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
       <secondary><application>SAP R/3</application></secondary>
     </indexterm>
 
-    <para>Installations of &sap; Systems using FreeBSD will not be
+    <para>Installations of <application>&sap;</application> Systems using FreeBSD will not be
       supported by the &sap; support team &mdash; they only offer support
       for certified platforms.</para>
 
@@ -1169,7 +1169,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
     <sect2 id="software">
       <title>Software</title>
 
-      <para>The following CD-ROMs have been used for &sap; installations:</para>
+      <para>The following CD-ROMs have been used for <application>&sap;</application> installations:</para>
 
       <sect3 id="software-46b">
 	<title>&sap.r3; 4.6B, &oracle; 8.0.5</title>
@@ -1225,10 +1225,10 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
 	</tgroup>
       </informaltable>
 
-      <para>Additionally, I used the <application>&oracle; 8
+      <para>Additionally, we used the <application>&oracle; 8
 	Server</application> (Pre-production version 8.0.5 for Linux,
 	Kernel Version 2.0.33) CD which is not really necessary, and
-	of course FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE (it was only a few days past 4.3
+	FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE (it was only a few days past 4.3
 	RELEASE).</para>
 
       </sect3>
@@ -1283,7 +1283,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
 	</informaltable>
 
         <para>Depending on the languages you would like to install, additional
-	  language CDs might be necessary. Here we're just using DE and EN, so
+	  language CDs might be necessary. Here we are just using DE and EN, so
 	  the first Language-CD is the only one needed. As a little note, the
 	  numbers for all four export CDs are identical. All three language CDs
 	  also have the same number (this is different from the 4.6B IDES
@@ -1296,7 +1296,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
       <title>&sap; Notes</title>
 
       <para>The following notes should be read before installing
-	<application>&sap.r3;</application> or proved to be useful
+	<application>&sap.r3;</application> and proved to be useful
 	during installation:</para>
 
       <sect3 id="sap-notes-46b">
@@ -1488,7 +1488,8 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
 
       <para>First you have to install FreeBSD. There are several ways to do
 	this (FreeBSD&nbsp;4.3 was installed via FTP, FreeBSD&nbsp;4.5 directly from
-	release-CD).</para>
+	the RELEASE CD) for more informations read the <xref
+	linkend="install-diff-media">.</para>
 
       <sect3 id="disk-layout">
 	<title>Disk Layout</title>