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Tweak the wording of the "What is GNOME" section as well as some other

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awkward grammar.

Submitted by:	adamw
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Joe Marcus Clarke 2007-03-11 06:29:46 +00:00
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commit 69efac850e
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svn path=/www/; revision=29760
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@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<!ENTITY title "The FreeBSD GNOME Project">
<!ENTITY % navinclude.gnome "INCLUDE">
]>
<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.89 2006/09/18 22:10:04 ahze Exp $ -->
<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.90 2006/10/14 16:36:13 marcus Exp $ -->
<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform"
xmlns:rdf="http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#"
@ -104,16 +104,23 @@
everything is easy to use, attractive, powerful,
and works the way you expect.</p>
<p>The major components of GNOME are the
<a href="http://www.gnome.org">GNOME desktop</a>, a
straightforward window-based desktop environment, and the
<p>The
<a href="http://www.gnome.org">GNOME
desktop</a> is a window-based desktop
environment that provides many business,
productivity, and entertainment
applications, and makes non-GNOME programs
faster and easier to run. The
<a href="http://developer.gnome.org">GNOME development
platform</a>, a collection of application-development
tools and libraries.</p>
platform</a> is a collection of
application-development tools and libraries
used by many programs, such as <a
href="http://www.firefox.com">Mozilla
Firefox</a>.</p>
<p>The FreeBSD GNOME Project is a team of devoted
committers and users that manage the integration
of GNOME and FreeBSD.</p>
developers and users that manage the
integration of GNOME and FreeBSD.</p>
<h2>Upgrading to GNOME 2.16?</h2>
@ -128,7 +135,7 @@
Most of GNOME has been ported to FreeBSD, but there is still
<a href="docs/volunteer.html">plenty left to be done</a>!</p>
<h2>Simple solutions to build problems - quickly!</h2>
<h2>One stop solution shop!</h2>
<p>GNOME is simple and easy to build using the FreeBSD ports system, but
sometimes things simply go wrong. If GNOME -- or anything that uses