diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml index e5c3c3be2e..c7db1f849b 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -910,7 +910,7 @@ THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE. TRW Financial Systems, Inc. provided 130 PCs, three 68 GB - fileservers, twelve Ethernets, two routers and an ATM switch for + file servers, twelve Ethernets, two routers and an ATM switch for debugging the diskless code. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml index 32c941bb80..56f2ee039b 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -1324,7 +1324,7 @@ ISDN BRI line What is it? NIS, which stands for Network Information Services, was - developed by Sun Microsystems to centralize adminstration of Unix + developed by Sun Microsystems to centralize administration of Unix (originally SunOS) systems. It has now essentially become an industry standard; all major Unices (Solaris, HP-UX, AIX, Linux, NetBSD, OpenBSD, FreeBSD, etc) support NIS. @@ -1442,7 +1442,7 @@ ISDN BRI line Similar to NT's backup domain controllers, NIS slave servers maintain copies of the NIS master's data files. NIS slave servers provide the redundancy, - which is needed in important enviroments. They also help + which is needed in important environments. They also help to balance the load of the master server: NIS Clients always attach to the NIS server, whose response they get first, and this includes slave-server-replies. @@ -1450,7 +1450,7 @@ ISDN BRI line NIS clients. NIS clients, like most NT workstations, authenticate against the NIS server (or the NT - domain controller in the NT Workstation case) to logon. + domain controller in the NT Workstation case) to log on. @@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@ ISDN BRI line Let's assume that you are the administrator of a small university lab. This lab, which consists of 15 FreeBSD machines, - currently has no centralised point of administration; each machine + currently has no centralized point of administration; each machine has its own /etc/passwd and /etc/master.passwd. These files are kept in sync with each other only through manual intervention; @@ -1643,7 +1643,7 @@ ISDN BRI line They are generated from configuration files in the /etc directory of the NIS master, with one exception: the /etc/master.passwd file. - This is for a good reason; you don't want to propogate + This is for a good reason; you don't want to propagate passwords to your root and other administrative accounts to all the servers in the NIS domain. Therefore, before we initialize the NIS maps, you should: @@ -1656,7 +1656,7 @@ ISDN BRI line You should remove all entries regarding system accounts (bin, tty, kmem, games, etc), as well as any accounts that you - don't want to be propogated to the NIS clients (for example + don't want to be propagated to the NIS clients (for example root and any other UID 0 (superuser) accounts). Make sure the @@ -1724,7 +1724,7 @@ ellington&prompt.root; vi /var/yp/Makefile Setting up a NIS slave server Setting up an NIS slave server is even more simple than - setting up the master. Logon to the slave server and edit the + setting up the master. Log on to the slave server and edit the file /etc/rc.conf as you did before. The only difference is that we now must use the option when running ypinit. @@ -2036,7 +2036,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; will forget to bar some users from logging onto sensitive machines, or you may even have to modify each machine separately, thus loosing the main benefit of NIS, - centralised administration. + centralized administration. The NIS developers' solution for this problem is called netgroups. Their purpose and semantics @@ -2106,7 +2106,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; - war, death, famine, polution + war, death, famine, pollution Your most important servers. Only the IT employees are allowed to log onto these machines. @@ -2127,7 +2127,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; trashcan - A very old machine without any critcal data. + A very old machine without any critical data. Even the intern is allowed to use this box. @@ -2156,7 +2156,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; carefully, you will only have to modify exactly one central configuration file to grant or deny access to machines. - The first step is the initialisation of the NIS map + The first step is the initialization of the NIS map netgroup. FreeBSD's ypinit does not create this map by default, but its NIS implementation will support it once it has been created. To create an empty map, simply type @@ -2203,7 +2203,7 @@ INTERNS (,able,test-domain) (,baker,test-domain) - Each of this fields can contain wildcards, see + Each of these fields can contain wildcards. See &man.netgroup.5; for details. @@ -2336,7 +2336,7 @@ ellington&prompt.user; ypcat -k netgroup.byuser add a new netgroup IT_INTERN, add the new IT interns to this netgroup and start to change the config on each and every machine... As the old saying goes: Errors in - centralised planning lead to global mess. + centralized planning lead to global mess. NIS' ability to create netgroups from other netgroups can be used to prevent situations like these. One possibility @@ -2403,7 +2403,7 @@ SMALLSRV IT_EMP IT_APP ITINTERN USERBOX IT_EMP ITINTERN USERS # # And a groups for a special tasks -# Allow echo und golf to access our anti-virus-machine +# Allow echo and golf to access our anti-virus-machine SECURITY IT_EMP (,echo,test-domain) (,golf,test-domain) # # machine-based netgroups @@ -2411,7 +2411,7 @@ SECURITY IT_EMP (,echo,test-domain) (,golf,test-domain) WAR BIGSRV FAMINE BIGSRV # User india needs access to this server -POLUTION BIGSRV (,india,test-domain) +POLLUTION BIGSRV (,india,test-domain) # # This one is really important and needs more access restrictions DEATH IT_EMP @@ -2463,7 +2463,7 @@ TWO (,hotel,test-domain) Keep the administration accounts out of the NIS - maps. You don't want to be propogating administrative + maps. You don't want to be propagating administrative accounts and passwords to machines that will have users that shouldn't have access to those accounts. @@ -2474,7 +2474,7 @@ TWO (,hotel,test-domain) these machines, they have effectively rendered many people without the ability to login to the lab. - This is the chief weakness of any centralised administration + This is the chief weakness of any centralized administration system, and it is probably the most important weakness. If you do not protect your NIS servers, you will have a lot of angry users! diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml index 779564658b..e3bdd0a658 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready Therefore, the user performing the backup must have rhosts access to the remote computer. The arguments to &man.rdump.8; and &man.rrestore.8; must suitable to use - on the remote computer. (e.g. When rdump'ing from + on the remote computer. (e.g. When rdumping from a FreeBSD computer to an Exabyte tape drive connected to a Sun called komodo, use: /sbin/rdump 0dsbfu 54000 13000 126 komodo:/dev/nrsa8 /dev/rda0a 2>&1) Beware: there diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml index 70569d401a..8fd4e94856 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Synopsis Rewritten by Chris Shumway - cshumway@cdrom.com, 10 Mar 2000. + cshumway@osd.bsdi.com, 10 Mar 2000. The following chapter will cover the basic commands and functionality of the FreeBSD operating system. If you are new to diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml index 2d354a1f90..d1c2c988c8 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ boot: selected. Finally, by default, the loader issues a 10 second wait - for keypresses, and boots the kernel if it is not interrupted. + for key presses, and boots the kernel if it is not interrupted. If interrupted, the user is presented with a prompt which understands the easy-to-use command set, where the user may adjust variables, unload all modules, load modules, and then diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml index e5c3c3be2e..c7db1f849b 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -910,7 +910,7 @@ THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE. TRW Financial Systems, Inc. provided 130 PCs, three 68 GB - fileservers, twelve Ethernets, two routers and an ATM switch for + file servers, twelve Ethernets, two routers and an ATM switch for debugging the diskless code. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml index 025a3d710f..d655eb0007 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ &prompt.root; mount -t ufs /dev/da1s1e /1 # Mount the partition(s) &prompt.root; vi /etc/fstab # When satisfied, add the appropriate entry/entries to your /etc/fstab. - If you have an IDE disk, subsitute ad + If you have an IDE disk, substitute ad for da. On pre-4.x systems use wd. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml index 82603eb48b..150bce0340 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Prepare the floppy disks You must prepare one floppy disk per image file you had to - download. It is imperitive that these disks are free from + download. It is imperative that these disks are free from defects. The easiest way to test this is to format the disks for yourself. Do not trust pre-formatted floppies. @@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent Check your BIOS drive numbering If you have used features in your BIOS to renumber your disk - drives without recabling them then you should read first to avoid confusion. @@ -838,7 +838,7 @@ ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent matcd - Matsushita/Panasonic - (Creative Soundblaster) proprietary interface (562/563 + (Creative SoundBlaster) proprietary interface (562/563 models) diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml index 32c941bb80..56f2ee039b 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -1324,7 +1324,7 @@ ISDN BRI line What is it? NIS, which stands for Network Information Services, was - developed by Sun Microsystems to centralize adminstration of Unix + developed by Sun Microsystems to centralize administration of Unix (originally SunOS) systems. It has now essentially become an industry standard; all major Unices (Solaris, HP-UX, AIX, Linux, NetBSD, OpenBSD, FreeBSD, etc) support NIS. @@ -1442,7 +1442,7 @@ ISDN BRI line Similar to NT's backup domain controllers, NIS slave servers maintain copies of the NIS master's data files. NIS slave servers provide the redundancy, - which is needed in important enviroments. They also help + which is needed in important environments. They also help to balance the load of the master server: NIS Clients always attach to the NIS server, whose response they get first, and this includes slave-server-replies. @@ -1450,7 +1450,7 @@ ISDN BRI line NIS clients. NIS clients, like most NT workstations, authenticate against the NIS server (or the NT - domain controller in the NT Workstation case) to logon. + domain controller in the NT Workstation case) to log on. @@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@ ISDN BRI line Let's assume that you are the administrator of a small university lab. This lab, which consists of 15 FreeBSD machines, - currently has no centralised point of administration; each machine + currently has no centralized point of administration; each machine has its own /etc/passwd and /etc/master.passwd. These files are kept in sync with each other only through manual intervention; @@ -1643,7 +1643,7 @@ ISDN BRI line They are generated from configuration files in the /etc directory of the NIS master, with one exception: the /etc/master.passwd file. - This is for a good reason; you don't want to propogate + This is for a good reason; you don't want to propagate passwords to your root and other administrative accounts to all the servers in the NIS domain. Therefore, before we initialize the NIS maps, you should: @@ -1656,7 +1656,7 @@ ISDN BRI line You should remove all entries regarding system accounts (bin, tty, kmem, games, etc), as well as any accounts that you - don't want to be propogated to the NIS clients (for example + don't want to be propagated to the NIS clients (for example root and any other UID 0 (superuser) accounts). Make sure the @@ -1724,7 +1724,7 @@ ellington&prompt.root; vi /var/yp/Makefile Setting up a NIS slave server Setting up an NIS slave server is even more simple than - setting up the master. Logon to the slave server and edit the + setting up the master. Log on to the slave server and edit the file /etc/rc.conf as you did before. The only difference is that we now must use the option when running ypinit. @@ -2036,7 +2036,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; will forget to bar some users from logging onto sensitive machines, or you may even have to modify each machine separately, thus loosing the main benefit of NIS, - centralised administration. + centralized administration. The NIS developers' solution for this problem is called netgroups. Their purpose and semantics @@ -2106,7 +2106,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; - war, death, famine, polution + war, death, famine, pollution Your most important servers. Only the IT employees are allowed to log onto these machines. @@ -2127,7 +2127,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; trashcan - A very old machine without any critcal data. + A very old machine without any critical data. Even the intern is allowed to use this box. @@ -2156,7 +2156,7 @@ basie&prompt.root; carefully, you will only have to modify exactly one central configuration file to grant or deny access to machines. - The first step is the initialisation of the NIS map + The first step is the initialization of the NIS map netgroup. FreeBSD's ypinit does not create this map by default, but its NIS implementation will support it once it has been created. To create an empty map, simply type @@ -2203,7 +2203,7 @@ INTERNS (,able,test-domain) (,baker,test-domain) - Each of this fields can contain wildcards, see + Each of these fields can contain wildcards. See &man.netgroup.5; for details. @@ -2336,7 +2336,7 @@ ellington&prompt.user; ypcat -k netgroup.byuser add a new netgroup IT_INTERN, add the new IT interns to this netgroup and start to change the config on each and every machine... As the old saying goes: Errors in - centralised planning lead to global mess. + centralized planning lead to global mess. NIS' ability to create netgroups from other netgroups can be used to prevent situations like these. One possibility @@ -2403,7 +2403,7 @@ SMALLSRV IT_EMP IT_APP ITINTERN USERBOX IT_EMP ITINTERN USERS # # And a groups for a special tasks -# Allow echo und golf to access our anti-virus-machine +# Allow echo and golf to access our anti-virus-machine SECURITY IT_EMP (,echo,test-domain) (,golf,test-domain) # # machine-based netgroups @@ -2411,7 +2411,7 @@ SECURITY IT_EMP (,echo,test-domain) (,golf,test-domain) WAR BIGSRV FAMINE BIGSRV # User india needs access to this server -POLUTION BIGSRV (,india,test-domain) +POLLUTION BIGSRV (,india,test-domain) # # This one is really important and needs more access restrictions DEATH IT_EMP @@ -2463,7 +2463,7 @@ TWO (,hotel,test-domain) Keep the administration accounts out of the NIS - maps. You don't want to be propogating administrative + maps. You don't want to be propagating administrative accounts and passwords to machines that will have users that shouldn't have access to those accounts. @@ -2474,7 +2474,7 @@ TWO (,hotel,test-domain) these machines, they have effectively rendered many people without the ability to login to the lab. - This is the chief weakness of any centralised administration + This is the chief weakness of any centralized administration system, and it is probably the most important weakness. If you do not protect your NIS servers, you will have a lot of angry users! diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml index 779564658b..e3bdd0a658 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready Therefore, the user performing the backup must have rhosts access to the remote computer. The arguments to &man.rdump.8; and &man.rrestore.8; must suitable to use - on the remote computer. (e.g. When rdump'ing from + on the remote computer. (e.g. When rdumping from a FreeBSD computer to an Exabyte tape drive connected to a Sun called komodo, use: /sbin/rdump 0dsbfu 54000 13000 126 komodo:/dev/nrsa8 /dev/rda0a 2>&1) Beware: there diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml index 70569d401a..8fd4e94856 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Synopsis Rewritten by Chris Shumway - cshumway@cdrom.com, 10 Mar 2000. + cshumway@osd.bsdi.com, 10 Mar 2000. The following chapter will cover the basic commands and functionality of the FreeBSD operating system. If you are new to diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml index 2d354a1f90..d1c2c988c8 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ boot: selected. Finally, by default, the loader issues a 10 second wait - for keypresses, and boots the kernel if it is not interrupted. + for key presses, and boots the kernel if it is not interrupted. If interrupted, the user is presented with a prompt which understands the easy-to-use command set, where the user may adjust variables, unload all modules, load modules, and then diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml index e5c3c3be2e..c7db1f849b 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -910,7 +910,7 @@ THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE. TRW Financial Systems, Inc. provided 130 PCs, three 68 GB - fileservers, twelve Ethernets, two routers and an ATM switch for + file servers, twelve Ethernets, two routers and an ATM switch for debugging the diskless code. diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml index 025a3d710f..d655eb0007 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ &prompt.root; mount -t ufs /dev/da1s1e /1 # Mount the partition(s) &prompt.root; vi /etc/fstab # When satisfied, add the appropriate entry/entries to your /etc/fstab. - If you have an IDE disk, subsitute ad + If you have an IDE disk, substitute ad for da. On pre-4.x systems use wd. diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml index 82603eb48b..150bce0340 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Prepare the floppy disks You must prepare one floppy disk per image file you had to - download. It is imperitive that these disks are free from + download. It is imperative that these disks are free from defects. The easiest way to test this is to format the disks for yourself. Do not trust pre-formatted floppies. @@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent Check your BIOS drive numbering If you have used features in your BIOS to renumber your disk - drives without recabling them then you should read first to avoid confusion. @@ -838,7 +838,7 @@ ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent matcd - Matsushita/Panasonic - (Creative Soundblaster) proprietary interface (562/563 + (Creative SoundBlaster) proprietary interface (562/563 models)