diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml index bd0bef8b72..31b3e6b3bc 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -440,11 +440,11 @@ Local1 (10.20.30.1, 10.9.9.30) --> T1-GW (10.9.9.1) High Traffic on a Segment Situation one is where your physical network segment is - overloaded with traffic, but you don't want for whatever reason to + overloaded with traffic, but you do not want for whatever reason to subnet the network and interconnect the subnets with a router. - Let's consider an example of a newspaper where the Editorial and + Let us consider an example of a newspaper where the Editorial and Production departments are on the same subnetwork. The Editorial users all use server A for file service, and the Production users are on server B. An Ethernet is used to connect all users together, @@ -560,7 +560,7 @@ Local1 (10.20.30.1, 10.9.9.30) --> T1-GW (10.9.9.1) My bridge/firewall is a Pentium 90 with one 3Com 3C900B and one 3C905B. The protected side of the network runs at 10mbps half duplex and the connection between the bridge and my router (a Cisco 675) runs - at 100mbps full duplex. With no filtering enabled, I've found that + at 100mbps full duplex. With no filtering enabled, I have found that the bridge adds about 0.4 milliseconds of latency to pings from the protected 10mbps network to the Cisco 675. @@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ Local1 (10.20.30.1, 10.9.9.30) --> T1-GW (10.9.9.1) - Local workstations don't need as much disk space because + Local workstations do not need as much disk space because commonly used data can be stored on a single machine and still remain accessible to everyone on the network. @@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ nfs_client_flags="-n 4" flag allows the root user on the remote system to write to the shared file system as root. Without the -maproot=0 flag even if - someone has root access on the remote system they won't + someone has root access on the remote system they will not be able to modify files on the shared file system. /a -maproot=0 host.domain.com box.example.com @@ -763,7 +763,7 @@ nfs_client_flags="-n 4" have permission to do so. Make sure your client is listed in your /etc/exports file. - It's important to remember that you must restart mountd + It is important to remember that you must restart mountd whenever you modify /etc/exports so that your changes take effect. This can be accomplished by sending the hangup signal to the mountd process : @@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ nfs_client_flags="-n 4" Have a common /usr/ports/distfiles directory that all your machines share. That way, when you go - to install a port that you've already installed on a different + to install a port that you have already installed on a different machine, you do not have to download the source all over again! @@ -1087,7 +1087,7 @@ Exports list on foobar: HP-UX - HP9000/8xx running HP-UX 9.04 or later (pre 9.04 doesn't + HP9000/8xx running HP-UX 9.04 or later (pre 9.04 does not work) Solaris @@ -1608,7 +1608,7 @@ ISDN BRI line This can be very useful feature, for example if you have an dedicated ISDN connection at your office and would like to - tap into it, but don't want to get another ISDN line at work. A router + tap into it, but do not want to get another ISDN line at work. A router at the office location can manage a dedicated B channel connection (64Kbs) to the Internet, as well as a use the other B channel for a separate data connection. The second B channel can be used for @@ -1678,7 +1678,7 @@ ISDN BRI line Windows NT It is similar to Windows NT's domain system; although the - internal implementation of the two aren't at all similar, + internal implementation of the two are not at all similar, the basic functionality can be compared. @@ -1724,7 +1724,7 @@ ISDN BRI line server to take over for it). There are some implementations of NIS (but not the - FreeBSD one), that don't try to reconnect to another server + FreeBSD one), that do not try to reconnect to another server if the server it used before dies. Often, the only thing that helps in this case is to restart the server process (or even the whole server) or the ypbind process @@ -1825,7 +1825,7 @@ ISDN BRI line Planning - Let's assume that you are the administrator of a small + Let us assume that you are the administrator of a small university lab. This lab, which consists of 15 FreeBSD machines, currently has no centralized point of administration; each machine has its own /etc/passwd and @@ -1926,7 +1926,7 @@ ISDN BRI line domain, very often the machine becomes unusable. The lack of user and group information causes most systems to temporarily freeze up. With this in mind you should make sure to choose a - machine that won't be prone to being rebooted regularly, or + machine that will not be prone to being rebooted regularly, or one that might be used for development. The NIS server should ideally be a stand alone machine whose sole purpose in life is to be an NIS server. If you have a network that is not very @@ -2007,7 +2007,7 @@ ISDN BRI line They are generated from configuration files in the /etc directory of the NIS master, with one exception: the /etc/master.passwd file. - This is for a good reason; you don't want to propagate + This is for a good reason; you do not want to propagate passwords to your root and other administrative accounts to all the servers in the NIS domain. Therefore, before we initialize the NIS maps, you should: @@ -2019,7 +2019,7 @@ ISDN BRI line You should remove all entries regarding system accounts (bin, tty, kmem, games, etc), as well as any accounts that you - don't want to be propagated to the NIS clients (for example + do not want to be propagated to the NIS clients (for example root and any other UID 0 (superuser) accounts). Make sure the @@ -2028,7 +2028,7 @@ ISDN BRI line chmod command, if appropriate. Tru64 Unix - When you have finished, it's time to initialize the NIS + When you have finished, it is time to initialize the NIS maps! FreeBSD includes a script named ypinit to do this for you (see its manual page for more information). Note that this @@ -2338,7 +2338,7 @@ nis_client_enable="YES" Barring Some Users from Logging On In our lab, there is a machine basie that is - supposed to be a faculty only workstation. We don't want to take this + supposed to be a faculty only workstation. We do not want to take this machine out of the NIS domain, yet the passwd file on the master NIS server contains accounts for both faculty and students. What can we do? @@ -2810,9 +2810,9 @@ TWO (,hotel,test-domain) Keep the administration accounts out of the NIS - maps. You don't want to be propagating administrative + maps. You do not want to be propagating administrative accounts and passwords to machines that will have users that - shouldn't have access to those accounts. + should not have access to those accounts. Keep the NIS master and slave @@ -3007,8 +3007,8 @@ lrwxr-xr-x 1 root wheel 14 Nov 8 14:27 libscrypt.so@ -> libscrypt.so.2 linkend="kernelconfig">. The bpf device is already part of the GENERIC kernel that is - supplied with FreeBSD, so if you don't have a custom - kernel, you shouldn't need to create one in order to get + supplied with FreeBSD, so if you do not have a custom + kernel, you should not need to create one in order to get DHCP working. For those who are particularly security conscious, @@ -3018,7 +3018,7 @@ lrwxr-xr-x 1 root wheel 14 Nov 8 14:27 libscrypt.so@ -> libscrypt.so.2 root). bpf is required to use DHCP, but if you are very sensitive about security, you probably - shouldn't add bpf to your + should not add bpf to your kernel in the expectation that at some point in the future you will be using DHCP. @@ -4271,7 +4271,7 @@ natd_flags="" This section will cover the basics in configuring inetd through its command-line - options and it's configuration file, + options and its configuration file, /etc/inetd.conf. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml index d79c73d45e..7414f9fc09 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready &prompt.root; tar cf - . | rsh hostname dd of=tape-device obs=20b - If you're worried about the security of backing over a network + If you are worried about the security of backing over a network you should use the &man.ssh.1; command instead of &man.rsh.1;. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml index 8d9a525d9b..2594afe39f 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -373,7 +373,7 @@ Swap: 256M Total, 38M Used, 217M Free, 15% Inuse the middle of some task that can not be interrupted. SIGKILL can not be ignored by a process. This is - the I don't care what you are doing, stop right now + the I do not care what you are doing, stop right now signal. If you send SIGKILL to a process then FreeBSD will stop that process there and then Not quite true—there are a few things that can not be @@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ Swap: 256M Total, 38M Used, 217M Free, 15% Inuse Which shell do you use? It is really a matter of taste. If you are a C programmer you might feel more comfortable with a C-like shell - such as tcsh. If you've come from Linux or are new + such as tcsh. If you have come from Linux or are new to a Unix command line interface you might try bash. The point is that each shell has unique properties that may or may not work with your diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml index 9b4be12e51..4fa6c7c0d7 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ boot: You can use kernel.GENERIC to refer to the generic kernel that comes on the install disk, or kernel.old to refer to - your previously installed kernel (when you've upgraded + your previously installed kernel (when you have upgraded or configured your own kernel, for example). @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ boot: To load a kernel configuration script (an automated - script which does the things you'd normally do in the + script which does the things you would normally do in the kernel boot-time configurator): load -t userconfig_script @@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ console none unknown off insecure init will attempt to run the script /etc/rc.shutdown, and then proceed to send all processes the TERM signal, and subsequently - the KILL signal to any that don't terminate + the KILL signal to any that do not terminate timely. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml index 788a0b391a..0e01b2d0c9 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ largest swap partition. Keeping the swap partitions near the same size will allow the kernel to optimally stripe swap space across the disks. Do not worry about overdoing it a little, - swap space is the saving grace of Unix. Even if you don't + swap space is the saving grace of Unix. Even if you do not normally use much swap, it can give you more time to recover from a runaway program before being forced to reboot. @@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ Why Partition? Why partition at all? Why not create one big root - partition and be done with it? Then I don't have to worry + partition and be done with it? Then I do not have to worry about undersizing things! There are several reasons this is not a good idea. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml index bca5456c4a..c3f6e03e0c 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ subscribe cvs-all &os.stable; is our development branch from which major releases are made. Changes go into this branch at a different pace, and - with the general assumption that they've first gone into + with the general assumption that they have first gone into &os.current; first for testing. This is still a development branch, however, and this means that at any given time, the sources for &os.stable; may or may not be suitable for any @@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ subscribe cvs-all of interest to you. Updates are generated on the fly by the server, according to what you have and what you want to have. Anonymous CVS is quite a bit more - simplistic than CVSup in that it's just an extension to + simplistic than CVSup in that it is just an extension to CVS which allows it to pull changes directly from a remote CVS repository. CVSup can do this far more efficiently, @@ -505,8 +505,8 @@ subscribe cvs-all There are other trade-offs, of course. If you inadvertently wipe out portions of your archive, CVSup will detect and rebuild the damaged portions for you. - CTM won't do this, and if you wipe some - portion of your source tree out (and don't have it backed up) then + CTM will not do this, and if you wipe some + portion of your source tree out (and do not have it backed up) then you will have to start from scratch (from the most recent CVS base delta) and rebuild it all with CTM or, with anoncvs, simply delete the bad bits and resync. @@ -806,7 +806,7 @@ Script done, … steps necessary to rebuild the system into a number of sub-steps. - Most of the time you won't need to pass any parameters to + Most of the time you will not need to pass any parameters to &man.make.1;, and so your command like will look like this: @@ -1170,7 +1170,7 @@ Script done, … If you used &man.mergemaster.8; to update /etc, then your MAKEDEV script should have been updated - already, though it can't hurt to check (with &man.diff.1;) + already, though it cannot hurt to check (with &man.diff.1;) and copy it manually if necessary. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml index c4e508727e..e58897b45a 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ . Then, if the first drive fails, or is attacked by a virus, or is scribbled upon by an operating system defect, he can easily recover by instructing the BIOS - to logically swap the drives. It's like switching the cables on the + to logically swap the drives. It is like switching the cables on the drives, but without having to open the case. SCSI @@ -68,18 +68,18 @@ the older SCSI drive is reporting numerous soft errors, and reports this fact to Bill. - After several more days, Bill decides it's time to address the + After several more days, Bill decides it is time to address the situation, so he grabs an identical SCSI drive from the disk drive "archive" in the back room. An initial surface scan indicates that this drive is functioning well, so Bill installs this drive as SCSI unit four, and makes an image copy from drive zero to drive four. Now that the new drive is installed and functioning nicely, Bill decides - that it's a good idea to start using it, so he uses features in the + that it is a good idea to start using it, so he uses features in the SCSI BIOS to re-order the disk drives so that the system boots from SCSI unit four. FreeBSD boots and runs just fine. Fred continues his work for several days, and soon Bill and Fred - decide that it's time for a new adventure -- time to upgrade to a + decide that it is time for a new adventure -- time to upgrade to a newer version of FreeBSD. Bill removes SCSI unit zero because it was a bit flaky, and replaces it with another identical disk drive from the "archive." Bill then installs the new version of FreeBSD onto the @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ installation goes well. Fred uses the new version of FreeBSD for a few days, and certifies - that it is good enough for use in the engineering department...it's + that it is good enough for use in the engineering department...it is time to copy all of his work from the old version. So Fred mounts SCSI unit four (the latest copy of the older FreeBSD version). Fred is dismayed to find that none of his precious work is present on SCSI @@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ spool/, and various types of temporary files, and as such, may get filled up. Filling up the root filesystem - isn't a good idea, so splitting /var from + is not a good idea, so splitting /var from / is often favorable. Another common reason to contain certain directory trees on @@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ and are used to unmount all mounted filesystems, possibly modified by the filesystem types listed after . - , however, doesn't attempt to unmount the + , however, does not attempt to unmount the root filesystem. @@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ wide variations of procedures to do this, the details are beyond the scope of this document. - Login as user root. After you've installed the + Login as user root. After you have installed the drive, inspect /var/run/dmesg.boot to ensure the new disk was found. Continuing with our example, the newly added drive will be da1 and we want to mount it on @@ -609,7 +609,7 @@ disk in post-install mode, Sysinstall will not create entries in /etc/fstab for you, so the mount point - you specify isn't important. + you specify is not important. You are now ready to write the new label to the disk and create a file system on it. Do this by typing @@ -770,7 +770,7 @@ Filesystem 1K-blocks Used Avail Capacity Mounted on md is a simple, efficient means to create memory filesystems. - Simply take a filesystem you've prepared with, for + Simply take a filesystem you have prepared with, for example, &man.vnconfig.8;, and: @@ -1065,7 +1065,7 @@ Filesystem 1K-blocks Used Avail Capacity Mounted on Introduction CDs have a number of features that differentiate them from - conventional disks. Initially, they weren't writable by the + conventional disks. Initially, they were not writable by the user. They are designed so that they can be read continuously without delays to move the head between tracks. They are also much easier to transport between systems than similarly sized media were at the diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml index be6b0d2f27..70784ba74e 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ more specialized (and demanding) audiences and are probably not of interest to the general public. It is also a good idea to establish a presence in the technical lists before joining one of these limited - lists so that you'll understand the communications etiquette involved. + lists so that you will understand the communications etiquette involved. @@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ subscribe <listname> [<optional address>] in the body of your message. For example, to subscribe yourself to - freebsd-announce, you'd do: + freebsd-announce, you would do: &prompt.user; mail majordomo@FreeBSD.org subscribe freebsd-announce diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml index b8b998e1bd..ba2cb70658 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ Mounting root from ufs:/dev/md0c Select The Distribution Set I chose to install everything using the "All" option since I - had the hard drive space. If you're concerned about space, + had the hard drive space. If you are concerned about space, consider the other distribution options. Select "All" using the arrow keys to highlight the item and @@ -2107,7 +2107,7 @@ Press [ENTER] now to invoke an editor on /etc/exports [ Yes ] No - This can be done later using /stand/sysinstall if you don't + This can be done later using /stand/sysinstall if you do not have graphics card and monitor information handy. Equipment damage can occur if settings are incorrect. Select [Yes] and press ENTER to proceed with configuring the @@ -2260,14 +2260,14 @@ when you've finished. If the monitor display needs adjusted, xvidtune can be ran to adjust them. There are warnings that improper settings can - damage your equipment. Heed them. If in doubt, don't do + damage your equipment. Heed them. If in doubt, do not do it. Instead, use the monitor controls to adjust the display for x-windows. There may be some display differences when switching - back to text mode, but it's better than damaging equipment. The + back to text mode, but it is better than damaging equipment. The xvidtune can be ran later using /stand/sysinstall. - If it doesn't appear or is distorted, kill the server with + If it does not appear or is distorted, kill the server with CTRLALTBACKSPACE @@ -2598,7 +2598,7 @@ when you've finished. FreeBSD Bootup If everything goes well, you will see similar messages scroll - off the screen and you'll arrive at a login prompt. You can view + off the screen and you will arrive at a login prompt. You can view the content of the messages by pressing SCROLL-LOCK and using PgUp and PgDn. Pressing SCROLL-LOCK again will return @@ -3137,9 +3137,9 @@ Please press any key to reboot. Booting Up for the Install - It's now time to go ahead and start the install. Put + It is now time to go ahead and start the install. Put the kern.flp floppy in the floppy - drive of the machine you're doing the headless install + drive of the machine you are doing the headless install on, and power on the machine. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml index 5e88f843f5..c4b8b02501 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -620,7 +620,7 @@ opposite. Due to the additional complexities that can evolve in the commercial use of GPL software we do, however, prefer software submitted under the more relaxed BSD copyright when - it's a reasonable option to do so. + it is a reasonable option to do so. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml index dce60bb7cf..c03fd5233d 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ options CD9660_ROOT #CD-ROM usable as root, CD9660 requiredThis option provides for System V shared memory. The most common use of this is the XSHM extension in X, which many graphics-intensive programs will automatically take advantage of for - extra speed. If you use X, you'll definitely want to include + extra speed. If you use X, you will definitely want to include this. options SYSVSEM #SYSV-style semaphores diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelopts/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelopts/chapter.sgml index c1cb46746a..1e3df5452d 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelopts/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelopts/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ People familiar with the C language will immediately recognize that everything could be counted as a config option where there is at least a single #ifdef referencing it... - However, it's unlikely that many people would put + However, it is unlikely that many people would put options notyet,notdef diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml index 57f6b37341..e5946af2ef 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ disco.example.com 7115-70839-20412 linux_devtools-6.1 you may have to use version 5.2 of these packages. - If you want to run the intelligent agent, you'll + If you want to run the intelligent agent, you will also need to install the Red Hat Tcl package: tcl-8.0.3-20.i386.rpm. The general command for installing packages with the official RPM port is : @@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ disco.example.com 7115-70839-20412 kernel tuning As described in the Oracle installation guide, you need to set - the maximum size of shared memory. Don't use + the maximum size of shared memory. Do not use SHMMAX under FreeBSD. SHMMAX is merely calculated out of SHMMAXPGS and PGSIZE. Therefore define @@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ export PATH &prompt.root; cd $ORACLE_HOME/network/lib &prompt.root; make -f ins_network.mk install - Don't forget to run root.sh again! + Do not forget to run root.sh again! Patching root.sh @@ -699,7 +699,7 @@ export PATH # # Define variables to be used in this script - When you don't install Oracle from CD, you can patch the source + When you do not install Oracle from CD, you can patch the source for root.sh. It is called rthd.sh and is located in the orainst directory in the source tree. @@ -967,7 +967,7 @@ export PATH &prompt.root; dd if=kern.flp of=/dev/fd0 &prompt.root; dd if=mfsroot.flp of=/dev/fd0 - Don't forget to use different disks for the two images, + Do not forget to use different disks for the two images, then boot from the floppy with the kern.flp-image on it and follow instructions. I used the following disk layout: @@ -1069,7 +1069,7 @@ DOCSUPFILE= /usr/share/examples/cvsup/doc-supfile Change the SUPHOST-value appropriately. The supfiles in /usr/share/examples/cvsup should be - fine. If you don't want to load all the docfiles, leave the + fine. If you do not want to load all the docfiles, leave the corresponding DOCSUPFILE-entry inactive. Starting cvsup to get the latest stable-sources is then very easy: @@ -1128,7 +1128,7 @@ DOCSUPFILE= /usr/share/examples/cvsup/doc-supfile I had some trouble downloading the required RPM-files (for 4.3 stable, 2nd May 2001), so you might try one of the following locations (if all the others fail and the following - aren't out of date): + are not out of date): ftp7.de.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/distfiles/rpm @@ -1189,7 +1189,7 @@ DOCSUPFILE= /usr/share/examples/cvsup/doc-supfile RedHat Tcl package (as is stated in the FreeBSD Handbook): tcl-8.0.5-30.i386.rpm (otherwise the relinking during Oracle install - won't work). There are some other issues regarding + will not work). There are some other issues regarding relinking of Oracle, but that is a Oracle-Linux issue, not FreeBSD specific as far as I understand it. @@ -1364,7 +1364,7 @@ Shell: /bin/sh choose to create them as simple directories, as they are all located on the same RAID 5 anyway: - First we'll set owners and right of some directories (as + First we will set owners and right of some directories (as user root): &prompt.root; chmod 775 /oracle @@ -1373,7 +1373,7 @@ Shell: /bin/sh &prompt.root; chown idsadm:sapsys /compat/linux/usr/sap &prompt.root; chmow 775 /compat/linux/usr/sap - Second we'll create directories as user ora<sid>. These + Second we will create directories as user ora<sid>. These will all be subdirectories of /oracle/IDS: &prompt.root; su - oraids @@ -1417,7 +1417,7 @@ sapmsIDS 3600/tcp # SAP Message Server. 3600 + Instance-Number Necessary Locales locale - SAP requires at least two locales that aren't part of + SAP requires at least two locales that are not part of the default RedHat installation. SAP offers the required RPMs as download from their FTP-server (which is only accessible if you are a customer with OSS-access). See note @@ -1425,7 +1425,7 @@ sapmsIDS 3600/tcp # SAP Message Server. 3600 + Instance-Number It is also possible to just create appropriate links (for example from de_DE and - en_US ), but I wouldn't recommend this + en_US ), but I would not recommend this for a production system (so far it worked with the IDES system without any problems, though). The following locales are needed: @@ -1702,7 +1702,7 @@ options SEMUME=100 #number of UNDO keys If I had not copied the CDs to the different locations, - then the SAP-Installer can't find the CD needed (identified + then the SAP-Installer cannot find the CD needed (identified by the LABEL.ASC-File on CD) and would then ask you to insert / mount the CD and confirm or enter the mount path. @@ -1711,7 +1711,7 @@ options SEMUME=100 #number of UNDO keys error-free. In my case, it requested EXPORT4 again (but indicated the correct key (6_LOCATI ON, then 7_LOCATION etc.), so one can just continue with entering the correct - values. Don't get irritated. + values. Do not get irritated. Apart from some problems mentioned below, everything should go straight through up to the point where the Oracle @@ -1748,12 +1748,12 @@ options SEMUME=100 #number of UNDO keys See the corresponding SAP-Notes or Oracle Readmes for further information. If this is no option (at the time of - installation I didn't have enough time to check this), one + installation I did not have enough time to check this), one could use the original binaries, or use the relinked binaries from an original RedHat System. For compiling the intelligent agent, the RedHat Tcl - package must be installed. If you can't get + package must be installed. If you cannot get tcl-8.0.3-20.i386.rpm, a newer one like tcl-8.0.5-30.i386.rpm for RedHat 6.1 should also do. @@ -1879,7 +1879,7 @@ options SEMUME=100 #number of UNDO keys umask 0; lsnrctl start - Otherwise you might get ORA-12546 as the sockets won't + Otherwise you might get ORA-12546 as the sockets will not have the correct permissions. See SAP note 072984. @@ -1891,7 +1891,7 @@ options SEMUME=100 #number of UNDO keys Request SAP R/3 License Key This is needed, as the temporary license is only valid for - four weeks. Don't forget to enter the correct Operating System: + four weeks. Do not forget to enter the correct Operating System: (X) Other: FreeBSD 4.3 Stable. First get the hardware key. Log on as user idsadm and call saplicense: @@ -2061,7 +2061,7 @@ STATUS=OK (had status ERROR) oraview.vrf FILE NOT FOUND During Oracle Installation - You haven't deselected Oracle On-Line Text Viewer + You have not deselected Oracle On-Line Text Viewer before starting the installation. This is marked for installation even though this option is currently not available for Linux. Deselect this product inside the Oracle installation menu and restart installation. @@ -2121,7 +2121,7 @@ rscp/TCP0B =TCP0B &prompt.root; umask 0; lsnrctl start - Otherwise one might get ORA-12546 as the sockets won't + Otherwise one might get ORA-12546 as the sockets will not have the correct permissions. See SAP note 0072984. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml index 0f5255d7aa..73d949af38 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ freefall MX 20 who.cdrom.com server. If you are not, or cannot, run your own DNS server, talk to your ISP or whoever does your DNS for you. - If you're doing virtual email hosting, the following + If you are doing virtual email hosting, the following information will come in handy. For the sake of an example, we will assume you have a customer with their own domain, in this case customer1.org and you want diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml index 3154a98df7..e0354722e4 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ program (like ls or grep) by referencing the CVS module name. Of course, anoncvs is also only good for - read-only operations on the CVS repository, so if it's your + read-only operations on the CVS repository, so if it is your intention to support local development in one repository shared with the FreeBSD project bits then CVSup is really your only @@ -1527,7 +1527,7 @@ Megabytes of gzip'd data is common for the XEmpty deltas. - Once you've picked a base delta to start from, you will also + Once you have picked a base delta to start from, you will also need all deltas with higher numbers following it. @@ -2323,8 +2323,8 @@ src-all take every file associated with the collection and tag you chose in the configuration file. However, this is not always what you want, especially if you are synching the doc, ports, or - www trees — most people can't read four or five - languages, and therefore they don't need to download the + www trees — most people cannot read four or five + languages, and therefore they do not need to download the language-specific files. If you are CVSuping the ports collection, you can get around this by specifying each collection individually diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml index b2f186cfae..3b4f8a3e32 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ pcm0: <Aureal Vortex 8830> at memory 0xfeb40000 irq 5 (4p/1r +channels dup - One or more of the device nodes wasn't created + One or more of the device nodes was not created correctly. Repeat the steps above. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/policies/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/policies/chapter.sgml index f9fcbba896..2cb0d8060c 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/policies/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/policies/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ It is of course not acceptable to add a person or group as maintainer unless they agree to assume this duty. On the other hand it - doesn't have to be a committer and it can easily be a group of + does not have to be a committer and it can easily be a group of people. @@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ obrien@FreeBSD.org - 30 March 1997 Shared Libraries If you are adding shared library support to a port or other piece of - software that doesn't have one, the version numbers should follow these + software that does not have one, the version numbers should follow these rules. Generally, the resulting numbers will have nothing to do with the release version of the software. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml index 3c1e3122cf..4ea5e3c82b 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ Some packages have compile time options relating to what they - can and can't do. For example, Apache + can and cannot do. For example, Apache can be configured with a wide variety of different builtin options. By building from the port you do not have to accept the default options, and can set them yourself. @@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56.4.tgz &prompt.root; pkg_add lsof-4.56.4.tgz - If you don't have a source of local packages (such as a + If you do not have a source of local packages (such as a FreeBSD CDROM set) then it will probably be easier to use the -r option to &man.pkg.add.1;. This will cause the utility to automatically determine the correct object format and release @@ -896,7 +896,7 @@ Receiving lsof_4.57D.freebsd.tar.gz (439860 bytes): 100% imake Some ports that use &man.imake.1; (a part of the X Windows - System) don't work well with PREFIX, and will insist on + System) do not work well with PREFIX, and will insist on installing under /usr/X11R6. Similarly, some Perl ports ignore PREFIX and install in the Perl tree. Making these ports respect PREFIX is a difficult or impossible @@ -1254,7 +1254,7 @@ arcade game. Help! This Port Is Broken! - If you come across a port that doesn't work for you, there are + If you come across a port that does not work for you, there are a few things you can do, including: diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml index 1f52f77c59..ce6eacc707 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ configuration values). It should be noted that the tunnel driver creates devices - on demand, so ifconfig -a won't necessarily + on demand, so ifconfig -a will not necessarily show up with any tun devices. @@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ protocol: ppp The string y.y.y.y should be replaced by the IP address that your ISP indicated for their gateway (the machine to which you connect). If - your ISP hasn't given you a gateway address, use 10.0.0.2/0. If you need to use a guessed address, make sure that you create an entry in @@ -835,7 +835,7 @@ exec /usr/sbin/ppp -direct $IDENT shell for all of your dialup users. This is an example from /etc/password for a dialup PPP user with username - pchilds (remember don't directly edit + pchilds (remember do not directly edit the password file, use vipw). pchilds:*:1011:300:Peter Childs PPP:/home/ppp:/etc/ppp/ppp-dialup @@ -1077,7 +1077,7 @@ set nbns 203.14.100.5 Your ISP will not normally require that you log into - the server if you're using PAP or CHAP. You must + the server if you are using PAP or CHAP. You must therefore disable your set login string. @@ -1153,7 +1153,7 @@ set nbns 203.14.100.5 hostname="foo.bar.com" If your ISP has supplied you with a static IP address and - name, it's probably best that you use this name as your host + name, it is probably best that you use this name as your host name. Look for the network_interfaces variable. @@ -1219,7 +1219,7 @@ set nbns 203.14.100.5 4 !bg sendmail -bd -q30m SMTP - If you don't like this, it is possible to set up a + If you do not like this, it is possible to set up a dfilter to block SMTP traffic. Refer to the sample files for further details. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml index b9385d687c..3eecd27ad2 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -1118,7 +1118,7 @@ CURE MIKE BANE HIM RACY GORE Generating a Single one-time Password - Once you've initialized S/Key, when you login you will be + Once you have initialized S/Key, when you login you will be presented with a prompt like this: &prompt.user; telnet example.com diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml index d63c8e6079..2f1afb17d2 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -916,7 +916,7 @@ ttyd5 "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200" vt100 on insecure dial-in service Configuring your FreeBSD system for dial-in service is very - similar to connecting terminals except that you're dealing with + similar to connecting terminals except that you are dealing with modems instead of terminals. @@ -1467,7 +1467,7 @@ AT&B2&W getty process on the appropriate communications port and is waiting for the modem to accept a call. - If the DTR indicator doesn't light, login to + If the DTR indicator does not light, login to the FreeBSD system through the console and issue a ps ax to see if FreeBSD is trying to run a getty process on the correct port. You should see @@ -2572,8 +2572,8 @@ start However, many machines do not support this option and will refuse to boot if you have no display hardware in the system. With these - machines, you'll have to leave some kind of graphics card plugged in, - (even if it's just a junky mono board) although you will not have to + machines, you will have to leave some kind of graphics card plugged in, + (even if it is just a junky mono board) although you will not have to attach a monitor into it. You might also try installing an AMI BIOS. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/sound/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/sound/chapter.sgml index b2f186cfae..3b4f8a3e32 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/sound/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/sound/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ pcm0: <Aureal Vortex 8830> at memory 0xfeb40000 irq 5 (4p/1r +channels dup - One or more of the device nodes wasn't created + One or more of the device nodes was not created correctly. Repeat the steps above. diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml index 021b692e28..0ccf88b880 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -239,8 +239,8 @@ So, the first thing you should do after reading this chapter, is to create an unprivileged user account for yourself - for general usage, if you haven't already. This applies equally - whether you're running a multi-user or single-user machine. + for general usage, if you have not already. This applies equally + whether you are running a multi-user or single-user machine. Later in this chapter, we discuss how to create additional accounts, and how to change between the normal user and superuser. @@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ nobody nobody is the generic unprivileged - system user. However, it's important to keep in mind that the + system user. However, it is important to keep in mind that the more services that use nobody, the more files and processes that user will become associated with, and hence the more privileged that user becomes. @@ -416,17 +416,17 @@ Goodbye! added users. We then saved the configuration, and then created an account for jru, and we made sure jru is in wheel - group (which we'll see is important later). + group (which we will see is important later). - The password you type in isn't echoed, nor are asterisks - displayed. Make sure you don't mistype the password twice. + The password you type in is not echoed, nor are asterisks + displayed. Make sure you do not mistype the password twice. Just use adduser without arguments - from now on, and you won't have to go through changing the + from now on, and you will not have to go through changing the defaults. If the program asks you to change the defaults, exit the program, and try the option. @@ -489,12 +489,12 @@ Goodbye! - rmuser can't be used to remove + rmuser cannot be used to remove superuser accounts, since that is almost always an indication of massive destruction. By default, an interactive mode is used, which attempts to - make sure you know what you're doing. + make sure you know what you are doing. rmuser Interactive Account Removal @@ -955,11 +955,11 @@ passwd: done colon-delimited fields. The first field is the group name, the second is the encrypted password, the third the group ID, and the fourth the comma-delimited list of members. It can safely be edited - by hand (assuming, of course, that you don't make any syntax + by hand (assuming, of course, that you do not make any syntax errors!). For a more complete description of the syntax, see the &man.group.5; manual page. - If you don't want to edit /etc/group + If you do not want to edit /etc/group manually, you can use the &man.pw.8; command to add and edit groups. For example, to add a group called teamtwo and then confirm that it exists you can use: diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml index 8428cd7b6a..92c1390fcd 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Your only decision is which version of XFree86 to run. XFree86 3.X is the maintenance branch of XFree86 development. - It's very stable, and it supports a huge number of graphics + It is very stable, and it supports a huge number of graphics cards. However, no new development is happening there. XFree86 4.X is a redesign of XFree86. As well as introducing many new features (including much better support for fonts and @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ XFree86 uses to talk to the graphics hardware. With most chipsets, this can be automatically determined, but it is still useful to know in case the automatic - detection doesn't work correctly. + detection does not work correctly. Video memory on the graphic adapter determines the resolution and color depth the target system can run at. This @@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ EndSection files into this directory you need to use ttmkfdir to create a fonts.dir file so that the X font renderer - knows that you've installed these new files. There is a FreeBSD + knows that you have installed these new files. There is a FreeBSD port for x11-fonts/ttmkfdir in /usr/ports/x11-fonts/ttmkfdir. &prompt.root; cd /usr/X11R6/lib/X11/fonts/TrueType @@ -690,9 +690,9 @@ EndSection dir "/usr/X11R6/lib/X11/Type1" And likewise for the other font directories (URW, truetype, etc) - containing fonts you'd like anti-aliased. Anti-aliasing makes + containing fonts you would like anti-aliased. Anti-aliasing makes sense only for scalable fonts (basically, Type1 and TrueType) so - don't include bitmap font directories here. The + do not include bitmap font directories here. The directories which you included here can now be commented out of your XF86Config file. @@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ match any family == "console" edit family =+ "mono"; Supposing you want to use the Lucidux fonts whenever - monospaced fonts are required (these look nice, and don't seem + monospaced fonts are required (these look nice, and do not seem to suffer from the spacing problem), you could replace that last line with these: @@ -1066,7 +1066,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 should simply replace the line that starts your current window manager with one that starts /usr/X11R6/bin/gnome-session instead. If you - haven't added anything special to your configuration file, + have not added anything special to your configuration file, then it is enough to simply type: &prompt.root; echo "/usr/X11R6/bin/gnome-session" > ~/.xinitrc @@ -1074,7 +1074,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 That's it. Type startx and you will be in the GNOME desktop environment. - If you're running a display manager like + If you are running a display manager like XDM, this will not work. Instead, you should create an executable .xsession file with the same command in it. To do this, edit your file @@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 Installing KDE2 - At the time of writing, a package for kde2 doesn't + At the time of writing, a package for kde2 does not exist yet. No problem! The ports tree hides all the complexity of building a package from source. To install KDE2, do this : @@ -1149,7 +1149,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 Internet, configure and compile KDE2, install the applications, and then clean up after itself. - Now you're going to have to tell the X server to launch + Now you are going to have to tell the X server to launch KDE2 instead of a default window manager. Do this by typing this: @@ -1157,7 +1157,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 Now, whenever you go into X-Windows, KDE2 will be your - desktop. (Note: this will not work if you're logging in via + desktop. (Note: this will not work if you are logging in via a display manager like xdm. In that case you have two options: create an .xsession file as described in the @@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 More Details on KDE2 Now that KDE2 is installed on - your system, you'll find that you can learn a lot from its + your system, you will find that you can learn a lot from its help pages, or just by pointing and clicking at various menus. Windows or Mac users will feel quite at home. @@ -1189,7 +1189,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 The KDE display manager - If you're an administrator on a multi-user system, you + If you are an administrator on a multi-user system, you may like to have a graphical login screen to welcome users. You can use xdm, as described @@ -1199,7 +1199,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 In particular, users can easily choose (via a menu) which desktop environment (KDE2, GNOME, or something else) to run - after logging on. If you're slightly adventurous and you want + after logging on. If you are slightly adventurous and you want this added flexibility and visual appeal, read on. To begin with, run the KDE2 @@ -1216,7 +1216,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 type kcontrol. Click on the icon on the left marked "System", then on - "Login manager". On the right you'll see various configurable + "Login manager". On the right you will see various configurable options, which the KDE manual will explain in greater detail. Click on "sessions" on the right. Depending on what window managers or desktop environments you @@ -1228,7 +1228,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0 Include a label failsafe. Play with the other menus as you like (those are mainly - cosmetic and self-explanatory). When you're done, click on + cosmetic and self-explanatory). When you are done, click on "Apply" at the bottom, and quit the control center. To make sure kdm understands @@ -1296,12 +1296,12 @@ esac its "RENDER" extension, and starting with version 2.3, Qt (the toolkit used by KDE) supports this extension. Configuring this is described in on antialiasing X11 fonts. So if you're + linkend="antialias"> on antialiasing X11 fonts. So if you are running up-to-date software, anti-aliasing is possible on your KDE2 desktop. Just go to your KDE2 menu, go to Preferences -> Look and Feel -> Style, and click on the checkbox "Use Anti-Aliasing for Fonts and Icons". - That's all. If you're running a Qt application which is not + That's all. If you are running a Qt application which is not part of KDE, you may need to set the environment variable QT_XFT to true before starting your program. @@ -1367,7 +1367,7 @@ esac The next time you start X, XFCE will be your desktop. (Note, as before: - if you're logging in via a display manager like + if you are logging in via a display manager like xdm, you should either create an .xsession, as described in the section on GNOME, but