From 6e4a0ab3f60241a35f9e71206c72a76ec512521d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sevan Janiyan Date: Fri, 7 Oct 2016 18:00:23 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Fix dead link to Apple's whitepaper on their AutoFS implementation using Archive.org mirror. Reword sentence leading up to link with a friendlier toned version. Replace contractions & spelling mistake raised by Igor. PR: 213022 Reported by: Ranjit Marathay Approved by: bcr (mentor) wblock Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D8156 --- .../books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml index 9095ac711b..387c8e31f5 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml @@ -999,9 +999,9 @@ Exports list on foobar: &prompt.root; service autounmountd start The &man.autofs.5; map format is the same as in other - operating systems, it might be desirable to consult - information from other operating systems, such as the Mac + operating systems. Information about this format from other + sources can be useful, like the Mac OS X document. Consult the &man.automount.8;, &man.automountd.8;, @@ -3369,7 +3369,7 @@ options { disable-empty-zone "0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA"; disable-empty-zone "1.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA"; -// If you've got a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter +// If you have a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter // its IP address here, and enable the line below. This will make you // benefit from its cache, thus reduce overall DNS traffic in the Internet. /* @@ -3425,7 +3425,7 @@ options { // query-source address * port NNNNN; }; -// If you enable a local name server, don't forget to enter 127.0.0.1 +// If you enable a local name server, do not forget to enter 127.0.0.1 // first in your /etc/resolv.conf so this server will be queried. // Also, make sure to enable it in /etc/rc.conf. @@ -3621,7 +3621,7 @@ zone "ip6.int" { type master; file "/etc/namedb/master/empty.db"; }; // understand how DNS and BIND work. There are sometimes // non-obvious pitfalls. Setting up a slave zone is usually simpler. // -// NB: Don't blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names +// NB: Do not blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names // and addresses instead. /* An example dynamic zone @@ -4763,7 +4763,7 @@ $include Kexample.com.+005+nnnnn.ZSK.key ; ZSK LoadModule php5_module libexec/apache24/libphp5.so