Make some wording in the ports/packages section more clear and

consistent.

PR:		docs/178763
Submitted by:	Drahos Cagan <drahos_1@yahoo.com>
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Warren Block 2013-05-23 10:43:17 +00:00
parent 4b0cb2bcfa
commit 71778e3eb0
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=41718

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@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ Info: Lists information about open files (similar to fstat(1))</screen>
<command>make <maketarget>quicksearch</maketarget>
key=<replaceable>string</replaceable></command>, where
<replaceable>string</replaceable> is some text to search
for. The text can be comments, descriptions or dependencies
for. The text can be in comments, descriptions, or dependencies
in order to find ports which relate to a particular subject
when the name of the program is unknown.</para>
@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56.4.tgz
<envar>FTP_PASSIVE_MODE</envar>, <envar>FTP_PROXY</envar>, and
<envar>FTP_PASSWORD</envar>. You may need to set one or more
of these if you are behind a firewall, or need to use an
FTP/HTTP proxy. See &man.fetch.3; for the complete list.
FTP/HTTP proxy. See &man.fetch.3; for the complete list of variables.
Note that in the example above <literal>lsof</literal> is used
instead of <literal>lsof-4.56.4</literal>. When the remote
fetching feature is used, the version number of the package
@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56.4.tgz
available from <ulink
url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/packages/"></ulink>,
or the <filename>/packages</filename> directory of the &os;
DVD distribution. The layout of the packages is similar to
DVD distribution. The layout of the packages directory is similar to
that of the <filename>/usr/ports</filename> tree. Each
category has its own directory, and every package can be found
within the <filename>All</filename> directory.</para>
@ -507,22 +507,22 @@ docbook =
<row>
<entry>=</entry>
<entry>The version of the installed package matches the
one found in the local ports tree.</entry>
one in the local ports tree.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>&lt;</entry>
<entry>The installed version is older than the one
available in the local ports tree.</entry>
<entry>The version of the installed package is older
than the one in the local ports tree.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>&gt;</entry><entry>The installed version is newer
than the one found in the local ports tree, meaning
<entry>&gt;</entry>
<entry>The version of the installed package is newer
than the one in the local ports tree, meaning
that the local ports tree is probably out of
date.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>?</entry>
<entry>The installed package cannot be found in the