Various grammatical cleanups

Reviewed by:	Valentino Vaschetto <logo@osd.bsdi.com>
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Tom Hukins 2001-06-28 21:17:14 +00:00
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<chapter id="x11">
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<para>To install GNOME from the network, simply type:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r gnome</userinput></screen>
<para>If you would prefer to build GNOME from source, then use
<para>If you would rather build GNOME from source, then use
the ports tree:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/x11/gnome</userinput>
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<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "/usr/X11R6/bin/gnome-wm" > ~/.xinirc</userinput></screen>
<para>That's it. Now just type 'startx' and you will be in the
<para>That's it. Type 'startx' and you will be in the
GNOME desktop environment.</para>
<para> Note: if you're running a display manager like xdm,
this will not work. Instead, you should create an
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<sect3 id="x11-wm-kde2-install">
<title>Installing KDE2</title>
<para>At the time this was written, a package for kde2 doesn't
<para>At the time of writing, a package for kde2 doesn't
exist yet. No problem! The ports tree hides all the
complexity of building a package from source. To install
KDE2, do this :</para>
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<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "/usr/X11R6/bin/startkde" > ~/.xinitrc</userinput></screen>
<para>Now everytime you go into X-Windows, KDE2 will be your
<para>Now, whenever you go into X-Windows, KDE2 will be your
desktop. (Note: this will not work if you're logging in via
a display manager like <filename>xdm</filename>. In that
case you have two options: create an