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Adam Weinberger 2004-02-16 22:39:49 +00:00
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<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.45 2003/12/28 01:46:10 marcus Exp $ -->
<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.46 2004/01/13 04:13:08 marcus Exp $ -->
<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform"
xmlns:rdf="http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#"
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<xsl:import href="includes.xsl"/>
<xsl:variable name="base" select="'..'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.45 2003/12/28 01:46:10 marcus Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.46 2004/01/13 04:13:08 marcus Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="title" select="'FreeBSD GNOME Project'"/>
<xsl:output type="html" encoding="iso-8859-1"
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<img src="{$base}/gnome/images/gnome.png" align="right"
border="0" alt="GNOME Logo"/>
<p>The GNOME project was born as an effort to create an entirely free
<p>The GNOME project was born to create an entirely free
desktop environment for free systems. From the start, the main
objective of GNOME has been to provide a user-friendly suite of
applications and an easy-to-use desktop. The FreeBSD GNOME Project
strives to bring GNOME to the FreeBSD user.</p>
applications and an easy-to-use desktop environment. The FreeBSD GNOME
Project brings GNOME to the FreeBSD user.</p>
<p>As with most GNU programs, GNOME has been designed to run on all
modern Unix-like operating systems. Through the efforts of the
FreeBSD GNOME Project and countless volunteers, that list of
operating systems includes FreeBSD.</p>
FreeBSD GNOME Project and countless volunteers, GNOME is fully
supported on FreeBSD.</p>
<p>The GNOME project has expanded its objectives over the past few
months to include addressing a number of problems in the existing
months to address a number of problems in the existing
<xsl:value-of select="$unix"/> infrastructure.</p>
<p>The GNOME project acts as an umbrella. The major components of
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<h2><font color="#990000">State of the port</font></h2>
<p>GNOME for FreeBSD is currently support on 4.8, 4.9, 5.2,
<p>GNOME for FreeBSD is currently supported on 4.8, 4.9, 5.2,
-STABLE, and -CURRENT. Most of GNOME has been ported to
FreeBSD; however, there is
<a href="docs/volunteer.html">plenty left to do</a>!</p>