Grammar, spelling, and readability fixes.

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Adam Weinberger 2004-02-16 22:39:49 +00:00
parent 48530ad73d
commit 72c6b58b75
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/www/; revision=20055

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<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.45 2003/12/28 01:46:10 marcus Exp $ --> <!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.46 2004/01/13 04:13:08 marcus Exp $ -->
<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform" <xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform"
xmlns:rdf="http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#" xmlns:rdf="http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#"
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<xsl:import href="includes.xsl"/> <xsl:import href="includes.xsl"/>
<xsl:variable name="base" select="'..'"/> <xsl:variable name="base" select="'..'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.45 2003/12/28 01:46:10 marcus Exp $'"/> <xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.46 2004/01/13 04:13:08 marcus Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="title" select="'FreeBSD GNOME Project'"/> <xsl:variable name="title" select="'FreeBSD GNOME Project'"/>
<xsl:output type="html" encoding="iso-8859-1" <xsl:output type="html" encoding="iso-8859-1"
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<img src="{$base}/gnome/images/gnome.png" align="right" <img src="{$base}/gnome/images/gnome.png" align="right"
border="0" alt="GNOME Logo"/> border="0" alt="GNOME Logo"/>
<p>The GNOME project was born as an effort to create an entirely free <p>The GNOME project was born to create an entirely free
desktop environment for free systems. From the start, the main desktop environment for free systems. From the start, the main
objective of GNOME has been to provide a user-friendly suite of objective of GNOME has been to provide a user-friendly suite of
applications and an easy-to-use desktop. The FreeBSD GNOME Project applications and an easy-to-use desktop environment. The FreeBSD GNOME
strives to bring GNOME to the FreeBSD user.</p> Project brings GNOME to the FreeBSD user.</p>
<p>As with most GNU programs, GNOME has been designed to run on all <p>As with most GNU programs, GNOME has been designed to run on all
modern Unix-like operating systems. Through the efforts of the modern Unix-like operating systems. Through the efforts of the
FreeBSD GNOME Project and countless volunteers, that list of FreeBSD GNOME Project and countless volunteers, GNOME is fully
operating systems includes FreeBSD.</p> supported on FreeBSD.</p>
<p>The GNOME project has expanded its objectives over the past few <p>The GNOME project has expanded its objectives over the past few
months to include addressing a number of problems in the existing months to address a number of problems in the existing
<xsl:value-of select="$unix"/> infrastructure.</p> <xsl:value-of select="$unix"/> infrastructure.</p>
<p>The GNOME project acts as an umbrella. The major components of <p>The GNOME project acts as an umbrella. The major components of
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<h2><font color="#990000">State of the port</font></h2> <h2><font color="#990000">State of the port</font></h2>
<p>GNOME for FreeBSD is currently support on 4.8, 4.9, 5.2, <p>GNOME for FreeBSD is currently supported on 4.8, 4.9, 5.2,
-STABLE, and -CURRENT. Most of GNOME has been ported to -STABLE, and -CURRENT. Most of GNOME has been ported to
FreeBSD; however, there is FreeBSD; however, there is
<a href="docs/volunteer.html">plenty left to do</a>!</p> <a href="docs/volunteer.html">plenty left to do</a>!</p>