Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

Reviewed by:	gabor
Approved by:	wblock
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Eitan Adler 2012-02-13 04:28:35 +00:00
parent 4b18d4f577
commit 74fe68bfa8
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=38449

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@ -1108,7 +1108,7 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,MULTICAST> metric 0 mtu 16384
<listitem>
<para>The status of the link (<literal>status</literal>)
is <literal>active</literal>, i.e. the carrier is detected.
is <literal>active</literal>, i.e., the carrier is detected.
For <devicename>dc1</devicename>, we see
<literal>status: no carrier</literal>. This is normal when
an Ethernet cable is not plugged into the card.</para>
@ -1664,7 +1664,7 @@ cron.* /var/log/cron
seeing processes started from other users, the following tunables can
be set in <filename>sysctl.conf</filename>:</para>
<programlisting># Do not log fatal signal exits (e.g. sig 11)
<programlisting># Do not log fatal signal exits (e.g., sig 11)
kern.logsigexit=0
# Prevent users from seeing information about processes that
@ -2070,7 +2070,7 @@ device_probe_and_attach: cbb0 attach returned 12</screen>
<command>fsck</command> though.)</para>
<para>The advantage is that meta-data operations are nearly as
fast as asynchronous updates (i.e. faster than with
fast as asynchronous updates (i.e., faster than with
<emphasis>logging</emphasis>, which has to write the
meta-data twice). The disadvantages are the complexity of
the code (implying a higher risk for bugs in an area that
@ -2200,7 +2200,7 @@ device_probe_and_attach: cbb0 attach returned 12</screen>
heavily loaded web server environment. For such environments, it
is recommended to increase this value to <literal>1024</literal> or
higher. The service daemon may itself limit the listen queue size
(e.g. &man.sendmail.8;, or <application>Apache</application>) but
(e.g., &man.sendmail.8;, or <application>Apache</application>) but
will often have a directive in its configuration file to adjust
the queue size. Large listen queues also do a better job of
avoiding Denial of Service (<abbrev>DoS</abbrev>) attacks.</para>