Whitespace-only fixups for the committers and lists entities conversion.

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml

@@ -40,10 +40,9 @@
 	  create applications that work in all the languages
 	  out-of-the-box without dirty hacks.</para>
 
-	<para>The &a.i18n;
+	<para>The &a.i18n; has been established.  If you are an I18N/L10N
-	  has been established.  If you are an I18N/L10N developer,
+	  developer, please send your comments, ideas, questions, and
-	  please send your comments, ideas, questions, and anything
+	  anything you deem related to it.</para>
-	  you deem related to it. </para>
 	
 	<para> Michael C. Wu will be maintaining an I18N works in progress
 	  homepage at <ulink

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml

@@ -2215,16 +2215,11 @@ disk            wd2     at wdc1 drive 1 # change from wd3 to wd2</programlisting
           <para>Yes.  FreeBSD currently runs on both Intel x86 and
             DEC (now Compaq) Alpha architectures.  Interest has also
             been expressed in a port of FreeBSD to the SPARC architecture,
-            join the &a.sparc;
+	    join the &a.sparc; if you are interested in joining that project.
-            if you are interested
+	    Most recent additions to the list of upcoming platforms are
-            in joining that project.  Most recent additions to the list of
+	    IA-64 and PowerPC, join the &a.ia64; and/or the &a.ppc; for more
-            upcoming platforms are IA-64 and PowerPC, join the
+	    information.  For general discussion on new architectures, join
-            &a.ia64; and/or the
+	    the &a.platforms;.</para>
-            &a.ppc;
-            for more information.
-            For general discussion on new architectures, join
-            the &a.platforms;.
-            </para>
 
           <para>If your machine has a different architecture and you need
             something right now, we suggest you look at <ulink

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml

@@ -47,8 +47,7 @@
     that would just reiterate the documentation for each language.  The aim of
     this section is to list those elements more likely to be useful to you.
     If you have a question about how best to markup a particular piece of
-    content, please post it to the
+    content, please post it to the &a.doc;.</para>
-    &a.doc;.</para>
 
   <note>
     <title>Inline vs. block</title>

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml

@@ -177,8 +177,7 @@
 	  <para>The Handbook's organisation may change over time, and this
 	    document may lag in detailing the organisational changes.  If you
 	    have any questions about how the Handbook is organised, please
-	    contact the
+	    contact the &a.doc;.</para>
-	    &a.doc;.</para>
 	</note>
 	
 	<sect4>

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.sgml

@@ -266,9 +266,8 @@
       </variablelist>
       
       <para>If anyone has recommendations for other software that is useful
-	when manipulating SGML documents, please let &a.nik;
+	when manipulating SGML documents, please let &a.nik; know, so they
-	know, so they can be added to this
+	can be added to this list.</para>
-	list.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 </chapter>

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/translations/chapter.sgml

@@ -178,9 +178,9 @@
 	  help.</para>
 
 	<para>If no one is listed on that page as translating for your
-	  language, then send a message to
+	  language, then send a message to the &a.doc; in case someone else
-	  the &a.doc; in case someone else is
+	  is thinking of doing a translation, but has not announced it yet.
-	  thinking of doing a translation, but has not announced it yet.</para>
+	  </para>
       </answer>
     </qandaentry>
       
@@ -290,9 +290,8 @@
 
 	<para>Put <filename>swedish-docs.tar.gz</filename> somewhere.  If you
 	  do not have access to your own webspace (perhaps your ISP does not
-	  let you have any) then you can e-mail
+	  let you have any) then you can e-mail &a.nik;, and arrange to e-mail
-	  &a.nik;, and arrange to e-mail the files 
+	  the files when it is convenient.</para>
-          when it is convenient.</para>
 
 	<para>Either way, you should use &man.send-pr.1; to submit a report
 	  indicating that you have submitted the documentation. It would be
@@ -301,9 +300,8 @@
 	  person committing it will be fluent in the language.</para>
 
 	<para>Someone (probably the Documentation Project Manager, currently
-	  &a.nik;) will then take your 
+	  &a.nik;) will then take your translation and confirm that it builds.
-          translation and confirm that it builds.  In particular, the 
+	  In particular, the following things will be looked at:</para>
-          following things will be looked at:</para>
 
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml

@@ -607,8 +607,7 @@ help
 	    Ongoing irrelevant chatter or flaming only detracts from the value
 	    of the mailing list for everyone on it and will not be tolerated.
 	    For free-form discussion on no particular topic, the &a.chat;
-	    is freely
+	    is freely available and should be used instead.</para>
-	    available and should be used instead.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>