diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml
index e90226ad47..ea00b5bbd5 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml
@@ -400,9 +400,8 @@
 	welcome.</para>
 
       <para>If your change is of a potentially sensitive nature,
-	e.g. you are unsure of copyright issues governing its further
-	distribution or you are simply not ready to release it without
-	a tighter review first, then you should send it to &a.core;
+	such as if you are unsure of copyright issues governing its further
+	distribution then you should send it to &a.core;
 	directly rather than submitting it with &man.send-pr.1;.  The
 	&a.core; reaches a much smaller group of people who
 	do much of the day-to-day work on FreeBSD.  Note that this