diff --git a/en/commercial/includes.sgml b/en/commercial/includes.sgml
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--- a/en/commercial/includes.sgml
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-<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/commercial/includes.sgml,v 1.4 1999/12/12 16:24:14 jhb Exp $ -->
+<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/commercial/includes.sgml,v 1.5 2000/06/12 11:56:30 asmodai Exp $ -->
 
 <!ENTITY vendorintroduction '
-<p>FreeBSD's power, flexibility, and reliability attracts
+<p>The power, flexibility, and reliability of FreeBSD attracts
 a wide variety of users and vendors. In addition to our <a
 href="../gallery/gallery.html">gallery</a> page, showcasing many
 of our users, here you will find vendors offering commercial