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Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

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Eitan Adler 2012-02-13 23:21:10 +00:00
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page should contain all of the necessary subscription
instructions.</para>
<para>To actually post to a given list you simply send mail to
<para>To actually post to a given list, send mail to
<email><replaceable>listname</replaceable>@FreeBSD.org</email>. It will then
be redistributed to mailing list members world-wide.</para>
@ -831,7 +831,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>The topic of any posting should adhere to the basic charter of
the list it is posted to, e.g. if the list is about technical
the list it is posted to, e.g., if the list is about technical
issues then your posting should contain technical discussion.
Ongoing irrelevant chatter or flaming only detracts from the value
of the mailing list for everyone on it and will not be tolerated.
@ -1337,7 +1337,7 @@
<para><emphasis>Jobs offered and sought</emphasis></para>
<para>This is a forum for posting employment notices and
resumes specifically related to &os;, e.g. if you are
resumes specifically related to &os;, e.g., if you are
seeking &os;-related employment or have a job involving
&os; to advertise then this is the right place. This is
<emphasis>not</emphasis> a mailing list for general

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url="http://pf4freebsd.love2party.net/"></ulink>.</para>
<sect2>
<title>Using the PF loadable kernel modules</title>
<title>Using the PF Loadable Kernel Modules</title>
<para>To load the PF Kernel Module add the following line to
<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
@ -281,7 +281,7 @@
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>PF kernel options</title>
<title>PF Kernel Options</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>kernel options</primary>
@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ device pfsync</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Available rc.conf Options</title>
<title>Available <filename>rc.conf</filename> Options</title>
<para>The following &man.rc.conf.5; statements configure
<acronym>PF</acronym> and &man.pflog.4; at boot:</para>
@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ options ALTQ_NOPCC # Required for SMP build</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Kernel options</title>
<title>Kernel Options</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>kernel options</primary>
@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ options IPFILTER_DEFAULT_BLOCK</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Available rc.conf Options</title>
<title>Available <filename>rc.conf</filename> Options</title>
<para>To activate IPF at boot time, the following statements need to
be added to <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ LOG_ERR - packets which have been logged and which can be considered short</scre
<listitem>
<para>The name of the interface the packet was processed on,
e.g. <devicename>dc0</devicename>.</para>
e.g., <devicename>dc0</devicename>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ LOG_ERR - packets which have been logged and which can be considered short</scre
<para>If the packet is an ICMP packet, there will be two fields
at the end, the first always being <quote>ICMP</quote>, and the
next being the ICMP message and sub-message type, separated by
a slash, e.g. ICMP 3/3 for a port unreachable message.</para>
a slash, e.g., ICMP 3/3 for a port unreachable message.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="firewalls-ipf-rules-script">
@ -1089,7 +1089,7 @@ sh /etc/ipf.rules.script</programlisting>
lock you out</emphasis> of the server. To be on the safe
side, you may wish to consider performing the initial
firewall configuration from the local console rather than
doing it remotely e.g. via
doing it remotely e.g., via
<application>ssh</application>.</para>
</warning>
</sect2>
@ -1902,7 +1902,7 @@ block in log first quick on dc0 all
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title><acronym>NAT</acronym> for a very large LAN</title>
<title><acronym>NAT</acronym> for a Large LAN</title>
<para>For networks that have large numbers of PC's on the LAN or
networks with more than a single LAN, the process of funneling
@ -2326,7 +2326,7 @@ ipfw add deny out</programlisting>
<programlisting>net.inet.ip.fw.verbose_limit=5</programlisting>
</warning>
<para>If your machine is acting as a gateway, i.e. providing
<para>If your machine is acting as a gateway, i.e., providing
Network Address Translation (NAT) via &man.natd.8;, please
refer to <xref linkend="network-natd"> for information
regarding the required <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>
@ -2408,7 +2408,7 @@ ipfw add deny out</programlisting>
port. Packets destined for a specific service, originate from the
source address using an unprivileged (high order) port and target
the specific service port on the destination address. All the above
parameters (i.e. ports and addresses) can be used as selection
parameters (i.e., ports and addresses) can be used as selection
criteria to create rules which will pass or block services.</para>
<indexterm>
@ -2875,7 +2875,7 @@ ks="keep-state" # just too lazy to key this each time
rules for services that are not required. To avoid logging
undesired messages, add a <literal>deny</literal> rule in the
inbound section. The <devicename>dc0</devicename> interface will
will have to be changed in every rule, with the actual name of the
have to be changed in every rule, with the actual name of the
interface (NIC) that connects your system to the public Internet.
For user <acronym>PPP</acronym>, this would be
<devicename>tun0</devicename>.</para>
@ -2977,7 +2977,7 @@ pif="dc0" # public interface name of NIC
# Allow out Time
&dollar;cmd 00260 allow tcp from any to any 37 out via &dollar;pif setup keep-state
# Allow out nntp news (i.e. news groups)
# Allow out nntp news (i.e., news groups)
&dollar;cmd 00270 allow tcp from any to any 119 out via &dollar;pif setup keep-state
# Allow out secure FTP, Telnet, and SCP
@ -3289,7 +3289,7 @@ pif="rl0" # public interface name of NIC
# Allow out Time
&dollar;cmd 090 &dollar;skip tcp from any to any 37 out via &dollar;pif setup keep-state
# Allow out nntp news (i.e. news groups)
# Allow out nntp news (i.e., news groups)
&dollar;cmd 100 &dollar;skip tcp from any to any 119 out via &dollar;pif setup keep-state
# Allow out secure FTP, Telnet, and SCP