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Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

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Eitan Adler 2012-02-19 02:15:01 +00:00
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@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
through the Ports Collection. The Ports include quite a few
utilities which can work in ways similar to &man.cu.1; and
&man.tip.1;,
i.e. <filename role="package">comms/minicom</filename>.</para>
i.e., <filename role="package">comms/minicom</filename>.</para>
</note>
</sect3>
@ -1173,7 +1173,7 @@ ttyu5 "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200" vt100 on insecure
modems instead of terminals.</para>
<sect2>
<title>External vs. Internal Modems</title>
<title>External Versus Internal Modems</title>
<para>External modems seem to be more convenient for dial-up, because
external modems often can be semi-permanently configured via
@ -1881,7 +1881,7 @@ AT&amp;B2&amp;W</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="direct-at">
<title>How Am I Expected to Enter These AT Commands?</title>
<title>How Am I Expected to Enter These <literal>AT</literal> Commands?</title>
<indexterm>
<primary><filename>/etc/remote</filename></primary>
@ -1903,9 +1903,9 @@ AT&amp;B2&amp;W</programlisting>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cu -l<replaceable>line</replaceable> -s<replaceable>speed</replaceable></userinput></screen>
<para><replaceable>line</replaceable> is the serial port
(e.g.<filename>/dev/cuau0</filename>) and
(e.g., <filename>/dev/cuau0</filename>) and
<replaceable>speed</replaceable> is the speed
(e.g.<literal>57600</literal>). When you are done entering the AT
(e.g., <literal>57600</literal>). When you are done entering the AT
commands type <command>~.</command> to exit.</para>
</sect2>
@ -2117,7 +2117,7 @@ raisechar=^^</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="zmodem-tip">
<title>How Can I Run zmodem with <command>tip</command>?</title>
<title>How Can I Run <application>zmodem</application> with <command>tip</command>?</title>
<para>To receive files, start the sending program on the remote end.
Then, type <command>~C rz</command> to begin receiving them
@ -2829,7 +2829,7 @@ ttyu3 "/usr/libexec/getty std.9600" unknown off secure</programlisting>
Change <literal>off</literal> to <literal>on</literal> for the
desired port. If you have changed the speed of the serial port,
you need to change <literal>std.9600</literal> to match the current
setting, e.g. <literal>std.19200</literal>.</para>
setting, e.g., <literal>std.19200</literal>.</para>
<para>You may also want to change the terminal type from
<literal>unknown</literal> to the actual type of your serial
@ -2907,7 +2907,7 @@ ttyu3 "/usr/libexec/getty std.9600" unknown off secure</programlisting>
while most systems will let you boot without a keyboard, there
are quite a few that will not let you boot without a graphics adapter.
Machines with AMI BIOSes can be configured to boot with no graphics
adapter installed simply by changing the
adapter installed by changing the
<quote>graphics adapter</quote> setting in the CMOS configuration to
<quote>Not installed.</quote></para>