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Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

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Eitan Adler 2012-02-19 02:15:01 +00:00
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@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
through the Ports Collection. The Ports include quite a few through the Ports Collection. The Ports include quite a few
utilities which can work in ways similar to &man.cu.1; and utilities which can work in ways similar to &man.cu.1; and
&man.tip.1;, &man.tip.1;,
i.e. <filename role="package">comms/minicom</filename>.</para> i.e., <filename role="package">comms/minicom</filename>.</para>
</note> </note>
</sect3> </sect3>
@ -1173,7 +1173,7 @@ ttyu5 "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200" vt100 on insecure
modems instead of terminals.</para> modems instead of terminals.</para>
<sect2> <sect2>
<title>External vs. Internal Modems</title> <title>External Versus Internal Modems</title>
<para>External modems seem to be more convenient for dial-up, because <para>External modems seem to be more convenient for dial-up, because
external modems often can be semi-permanently configured via external modems often can be semi-permanently configured via
@ -1881,7 +1881,7 @@ AT&amp;B2&amp;W</programlisting>
</sect2> </sect2>
<sect2 id="direct-at"> <sect2 id="direct-at">
<title>How Am I Expected to Enter These AT Commands?</title> <title>How Am I Expected to Enter These <literal>AT</literal> Commands?</title>
<indexterm> <indexterm>
<primary><filename>/etc/remote</filename></primary> <primary><filename>/etc/remote</filename></primary>
@ -1903,9 +1903,9 @@ AT&amp;B2&amp;W</programlisting>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cu -l<replaceable>line</replaceable> -s<replaceable>speed</replaceable></userinput></screen> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cu -l<replaceable>line</replaceable> -s<replaceable>speed</replaceable></userinput></screen>
<para><replaceable>line</replaceable> is the serial port <para><replaceable>line</replaceable> is the serial port
(e.g.<filename>/dev/cuau0</filename>) and (e.g., <filename>/dev/cuau0</filename>) and
<replaceable>speed</replaceable> is the speed <replaceable>speed</replaceable> is the speed
(e.g.<literal>57600</literal>). When you are done entering the AT (e.g., <literal>57600</literal>). When you are done entering the AT
commands type <command>~.</command> to exit.</para> commands type <command>~.</command> to exit.</para>
</sect2> </sect2>
@ -2117,7 +2117,7 @@ raisechar=^^</programlisting>
</sect2> </sect2>
<sect2 id="zmodem-tip"> <sect2 id="zmodem-tip">
<title>How Can I Run zmodem with <command>tip</command>?</title> <title>How Can I Run <application>zmodem</application> with <command>tip</command>?</title>
<para>To receive files, start the sending program on the remote end. <para>To receive files, start the sending program on the remote end.
Then, type <command>~C rz</command> to begin receiving them Then, type <command>~C rz</command> to begin receiving them
@ -2829,7 +2829,7 @@ ttyu3 "/usr/libexec/getty std.9600" unknown off secure</programlisting>
Change <literal>off</literal> to <literal>on</literal> for the Change <literal>off</literal> to <literal>on</literal> for the
desired port. If you have changed the speed of the serial port, desired port. If you have changed the speed of the serial port,
you need to change <literal>std.9600</literal> to match the current you need to change <literal>std.9600</literal> to match the current
setting, e.g. <literal>std.19200</literal>.</para> setting, e.g., <literal>std.19200</literal>.</para>
<para>You may also want to change the terminal type from <para>You may also want to change the terminal type from
<literal>unknown</literal> to the actual type of your serial <literal>unknown</literal> to the actual type of your serial
@ -2907,7 +2907,7 @@ ttyu3 "/usr/libexec/getty std.9600" unknown off secure</programlisting>
while most systems will let you boot without a keyboard, there while most systems will let you boot without a keyboard, there
are quite a few that will not let you boot without a graphics adapter. are quite a few that will not let you boot without a graphics adapter.
Machines with AMI BIOSes can be configured to boot with no graphics Machines with AMI BIOSes can be configured to boot with no graphics
adapter installed simply by changing the adapter installed by changing the
<quote>graphics adapter</quote> setting in the CMOS configuration to <quote>graphics adapter</quote> setting in the CMOS configuration to
<quote>Not installed.</quote></para> <quote>Not installed.</quote></para>