From 8150aa665fb1ba6077bc53e5a13c27ca3573cda0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Thu, 2 Apr 2015 23:44:36 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] compiz-fusion: remove snark
rewrite abstract to not be snarky and to better explain the point of the
article.
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1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml
index f0c4a76a34..48c3243899 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml
@@ -24,18 +24,12 @@
</legalnotice>
<abstract>
- <para>The Linux world has been overwhelmed lately by what seems to be
- the latest fashion: 3D Desktop effects. While their usefulness is
- rather heavily debated, the wow factor behind the composited desktop
- holds quite well. Several different programs have emerged, like
- <link xlink:href="http://compiz.org/"><application>Compiz</application></link>,
- <link xlink:href="http://www.beryl-project.org/"><application>Beryl</application></link>,
- and the latest <link xlink:href="http://www.compiz-fusion.org/"><application>Compiz Fusion</application></link>.
- You do not need to miss these effects when using &os;. These
- instructions will help you install and configure your system for the
- latest 3D desktop experience using
- <application>Compiz Fusion</application> and nVidia drivers
- (if applicable).</para>
+ <para>One way to increase the pleasantness of using a desktop
+ computer is by having nice 3D effects.
+ This article walks through the installation
+ <application>Compiz</application> which is one example
+ program which to produce nice effects. It assumes the use of
+ nVidia drivers, although these are not required.</para>
</abstract>
</info>