Inserted a missing parenthesis, hyphen, comma, an "a", a "the", and

--  Removed "for" from "caused for the system".
--  Changed "filesystem" to "file system".
--  Changed "base base" to "base".
--  Replaced a comma with a semicolon.
--  Changed "We skip using" to "We avoid using".
--  Changed ", i.e.:" to "; i.e.,".
--  Down-cased "In" at the start of a sentence fragment.

Approved by:    keramida

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
       This information is provided through the &man.geom.4; manual
       page and its various SEE ALSO references.  This chapter is also
       not a definitive guide to <acronym>RAID</acronym>
-      configurations.  Only GEOM supported <acronym>RAID</acronym>
+      configurations.  Only GEOM-supported <acronym>RAID</acronym>
       classifications will be discussed.</para>
 
     <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to use the base base utilities to configure, maintain
+	<para>How to use the base utilities to configure, maintain,
 	  and manipulate the various <acronym>RAID</acronym>
 	  levels.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ XXX: What message?  Put it inside the screen output above.
 
   <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount /dev/stripe/st0a /mnt</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>To mount this striped filesystem automatically during the boot
+  <para>To mount this striped file system automatically during the boot
     process, place the volume information in
     <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file:</para>
 
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ XXX: What message?  Put it inside the screen output above.
     <para>Begin by installing &os; on the first disk with only two
       partitions.  One should be a swap partition, double the
       <acronym>RAM</acronym> size and all remaining space devoted to
-      the root (<filename role="directory">/</filename> file system.
+      the root (<filename role="directory">/</filename>) file system.
       It is possible to have separate partitions for other mount points;
       however, this will increase the difficulty level ten fold due to
       manual alteration of the &man.bsdlabel.8; and &man.fdisk.8;
@@ -276,13 +276,13 @@ XXX: What message?  Put it inside the screen output above.
 	directory.</para>
     </note>
 
-    <para>Initialize GEOM, this will load the
+    <para>Initialize GEOM; this will load the
       <filename>/boot/kernel/geom_mirror.ko</filename> kernel
       module:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>geom load</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install generic <command>fdisk</command> label and boot code
+    <para>Install a generic <command>fdisk</command> label and boot code
       to newly created <filename>gm0</filename> device:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>fdisk -vBI /dev/mirror/gm0</userinput></screen>
@@ -303,8 +303,8 @@ XXX: What message?  Put it inside the screen output above.
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>newfs -U /dev/mirror/gm0s1a</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>This should have caused for the system to spit out some
-      information and a bunch of numbers.  This is good, examine the
+    <para>This should have caused the system to spit out some
+      information and a bunch of numbers.  This is good.  Examine the
       screen for any error messages and mount the device to the
       <filename role="directory">/mnt</filename> mount point:</para>
 
@@ -313,13 +313,13 @@ XXX: What message?  Put it inside the screen output above.
     <para>Now move all data from the boot disk over to this new file
       system.  This example uses the &man.dump.8; and &man.restore.8;
       commands; however, &man.dd.1; would also work with this scenario.
-      We skip using &man.tar.1; because it will not copy over the boot
+      We avoid using &man.tar.1; because it will not copy over the boot
       code.  Thus, failure would be guaranteed.</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dump -L -0 -f- / |(cd /mnt && restore -r -v -f-)</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>This must be done for each file system.  Simply place the
-      appropriate file system in correct location when running the
+      appropriate file system in the correct location when running the
       aforementioned command.</para>
 
     <para>Now edit the replicated <filename>/mnt/etc/fstab</filename>
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ XXX: What message?  Put it inside the screen output above.
 &prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror insert gm0 /dev/da0</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The <option>-a</option> flag tells &man.gmirror.8; to use
-      automatic synchronization, i.e.: mirror the disk writes
+      automatic synchronization; i.e., mirror the disk writes
       automatically.  The manual page explains how to rebuild and
       replace disks, although it uses <filename>data</filename>
       in place of <filename>gm0</filename>.</para>
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ OK? <userinput>boot</userinput></screen>
 
 	<programlisting>options	GEOM_MIRROR</programlisting>
 
-	<para>In the kernel configuration file, rebuild and reinstall.
+	<para>in the kernel configuration file, rebuild and reinstall.
 	  That should remedy this issue.</para>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>