diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml
index 406bb85d3c..70587c2f4b 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml
@@ -183,9 +183,10 @@
 	<emphasis>regardless</emphasis> of the indentation level of the file
 	which might contain this one.</para>
 
-      <para>Every start tag increases the indentation level by 2 spaces, and
-	every end tag decreases the indentation level by 2 spaces.  Replace
-	as many leading spaces with tabs as appropriate.  Do not use
+      <para>Opening tags increase the indentation level by 2 spaces.
+	Closing tags decrease the indentation level by 2 spaces.  Blocks
+	of 8 spaces at the start of a line should be replaced with a tab.
+	Do not use
 	spaces in front of tabs, and do not add extraneous whitespace at the
 	end of a line.  Content
 	within elements should be indented by two spaces if the content runs
@@ -209,11 +210,6 @@ V
         <emphasis>regardless</emphasis> of the indentation level of the file
         which might contain this one.</para>
 
-      <para>Every start tag increases the indentation level by 2 spaces, and
-        every end tag decreases the indentation level by 2 spaces.  Content
-        within elements should be indented by two spaces if the content runs
-        over more than one line.</para>
-
       ...	
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
@@ -224,6 +220,19 @@ V
 	<literal>sgml-mode</literal> should be loaded automatically, and the
 	<application>Emacs</application> local variables at the bottom of each file should enforce these
 	styles.</para>
+
+      <para><application>Vim</application> users might want to configure
+	their editor with:</para>
+
+      <programlisting>augroup sgmledit
+  autocmd FileType sgml set formatoptions=cq2l " Special formatting options
+  autocmd FileType sgml set textwidth=70       " Wrap lines at 70 spaces
+  autocmd FileType sgml set shiftwidth=2       " Automatically indent
+  autocmd FileType sgml set softtabstop=2      " Tab key indents 2 spaces
+  autocmd FileType sgml set tabstop=8          " Replace 8 spaces with a tab
+  autocmd FileType sgml set autoindent         " Automatic indentation
+augroup END</programlisting>
+
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>