Capitalize words in title tags, remove redundant words and rewrite one

sentence in the process. This makes this file igor clean.
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Benedict Reuschling 2014-05-23 17:36:54 +00:00
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those directories. In the execution of
<filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename>, one other
<filename>rc.conf</filename> variable comes into play &ndash;
<literal>varsize</literal>. The
<filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> file creates a
<filename>/var</filename> partition based on the value of
this variable in <filename>rc.conf</filename>:</para>
<literal>varsize</literal>. A <filename>/var</filename>
partition is created by <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> based
on the value of this variable in
<filename>rc.conf</filename>:</para>
<programlisting>varsize=8192</programlisting>
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logging or temporary file creation and destruction can do the
same. Therefore, in addition to removing the
<literal>swap</literal> entry from your
<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file, you should also change the
<filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, you should also change the
Options field for each filesystem to <literal>ro</literal> as
follows:</para>
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</sect1>
<sect1>
<title>Building a File System From Scratch</title>
<title>Building a File System from Scratch</title>
<para>Because ATA compatible compact-flash cards are seen by &os;
as normal IDE hard drives, you could theoretically install &os;
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<procedure>
<step>
<title>Partitioning your flash media device</title>
<title>Partitioning Your Flash Media Device</title>
<para>After booting with the kern and mfsroot floppies, choose
<literal>custom</literal> from the installation menu. In
the custom installation menu, choose
<literal>partition</literal>. In the partition menu, you
should delete all existing partitions using the
<keycap>d</keycap> key. After deleting all existing
partitions, create a partition using the <keycap>c</keycap>
key and accept the default value for the size of the
should delete all existing partitions using
<keycap>d</keycap>. After deleting all existing
partitions, create a partition using <keycap>c</keycap>
and accept the default value for the size of the
partition. When asked for the type of the partition, make
sure the value is set to <literal>165</literal>. Now write
this partition table to the disk by pressing the
<keycap>w</keycap> key (this is a hidden option on this
this partition table to the disk by pressing
<keycap>w</keycap> (this is a hidden option on this
screen). If you are using an ATA compatible compact flash
card, you should choose the &os; Boot Manager. Now press
the <keycap>q</keycap> key to quit the partition menu. You
<keycap>q</keycap> to quit the partition menu. You
will be shown the boot manager menu once more - repeat the
choice you made earlier.</para>
</step>
<step>
<title>Creating filesystems on your flash memory
device</title>
<title>Creating Filesystems on Your Flash Memory
Device</title>
<para>Exit the custom installation menu, and from the main
installation menu choose the <literal>fixit</literal>
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</step>
<step>
<title>Placing your filesystem on the flash media</title>
<title>Placing Your Filesystem on the Flash Media</title>
<para>Mount the newly prepared flash media:</para>
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the Apache web server will be provided.</para>
<sect2>
<title>cron</title>
<title>Cron</title>
<para>Upon boot, <filename>/var</filename> gets populated by
<filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> using the list from
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</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>syslog</title>
<title>Syslog</title>
<para><filename>syslog.conf</filename> specifies the locations
of certain log files that exist in