From 8ade1cba11811c2030e4a2af65a425f1de158f31 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sat, 18 Feb 2012 05:33:57 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found
 with igor.

Reviewed by:	gabor
Approved by:	wblock
---
 .../books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml         |  6 +++---
 .../books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml         |  2 +-
 .../handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml      | 20 +++++++++----------
 3 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
index 44cccea951..46894acfe0 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
@@ -1183,7 +1183,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3 id="portupgrade">
-	<title>Upgrading Ports using Portupgrade</title>
+	<title>Upgrading Ports Using Portupgrade</title>
 
 	<indexterm>
 	  <primary>portupgrade</primary>
@@ -1237,7 +1237,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3 id="portmanager">
-	<title>Upgrading Ports using Portmanager</title>
+	<title>Upgrading Ports Using Portmanager</title>
 
 	<indexterm>
 	  <primary>portmanager</primary>
@@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3 id="portmaster">
-	<title>Upgrading Ports using Portmaster</title>
+	<title>Upgrading Ports Using Portmaster</title>
 
 	<indexterm>
 	  <primary>portmaster</primary>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml
index 8f616a7c9d..72a780dcdb 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@
 	the new user a welcome message.</para>
 
       <example>
-	<title>Adding a user on &os;</title>
+	<title>Adding a User on &os;</title>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>adduser</userinput>
 Username: <userinput>jru</userinput>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
index 66da4709d3..f6c32b657b 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@
 
           <procedure>
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Set boot loader variables</title>
+	      <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
 
 	      <para>The most important step is to reduce the
 	        <option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title>
+	      <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
 
 	      <para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB
 	        device drivers.  <application>Parallels</application>
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Setup networking</title>
+	      <title>Configure Networking</title>
 
 	      <para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
 	        using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ xenbr1          8000.feffffffffff   no                  vif0.1
 
           <procedure>
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Set boot loader variables</title>
+	      <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
 
 	      <para>The most important step is to reduce the
 	        <option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ xenbr1          8000.feffffffffff   no                  vif0.1
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title>
+	      <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
 
 	      <para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB
 	        device drivers.  <application>Virtual PC</application>
@@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ xenbr1          8000.feffffffffff   no                  vif0.1
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Setup networking</title>
+	      <title>Configure Networking</title>
 
 	      <para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
 	        using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ xenbr1          8000.feffffffffff   no                  vif0.1
 
           <procedure>
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Set boot loader variables</title>
+	      <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
 
 	      <para>The most important step is to reduce the
 	        <option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ xenbr1          8000.feffffffffff   no                  vif0.1
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title>
+	      <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
 
 	      <para>You can remove all of the FireWire, and USB device
 	        drivers.  <application>VMware</application> provides a
@@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ xenbr1          8000.feffffffffff   no                  vif0.1
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Setup networking</title>
+	      <title>Configure Networking</title>
 
 	      <para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
 	        using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
 &lt;!--
 # Sun VirtualBox
 # Hal driver description for the vboxmouse driver
-# $Id: chapter.sgml,v 1.29 2012-02-15 18:37:26 eadler Exp $
+# $Id: chapter.sgml,v 1.30 2012-02-18 05:33:57 eadler Exp $
 
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