diff --git a/en/releases/5.2.1R/announce.sgml b/en/releases/5.2.1R/announce.sgml index 0806299aec..15e884def3 100644 --- a/en/releases/5.2.1R/announce.sgml +++ b/en/releases/5.2.1R/announce.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -40,10 +40,10 @@ in the FreeBSD 5.2 release. These include:

-FreeBSD 5.2.1 also contains a number of significant stability and -performance improvements over FreeBSD 5.2. However, it is still +FreeBSD 5.2.1 also contains a number of other significant stability and +security improvements over FreeBSD 5.2. However, it is still considered a 'New Technology' release and might not be suitable for -all users. Users with more conservative needs may prefer to continue +all users. Those with more conservative needs may prefer to continue using FreeBSD 4.X. Information on the various trade-offs involved, as well as some notes on future plans for both FreeBSD 4.X and 5.X, can be found in the Early Adopter's Guide, available here: