Clarity and punctuation improvements.

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Warren Block 2013-08-03 14:10:45 +00:00
parent 22227f0abb
commit 8df38f00ca
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=42491

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</itemizedlist>
<para>Subversion can be installed from the &os; Ports
Collection, by issuing the following commands:</para>
Collection by issuing these commands:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/devel/subversion</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>make clean install</userinput></screen>
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<title>&os; Ports Tree Branches and Layout</title>
<para>In <literal>svn+ssh://svn.freebsd.org/ports</literal>,
<emphasis>ports</emphasis> refers repository root of the
<emphasis>ports</emphasis> refers to the repository root of the
ports tree.</para>
<para>In general, most &os; port work will be done within
@ -710,8 +710,8 @@
<para>It is possible to anonymously check out the &os;
repository with Subversion. This will give access to a
read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed
to. To do this, use the following command:</para>
read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed back
to the main repository. To do this, use the following command:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn co <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/base/head /usr/src</userinput></screen>
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<note>
<para>Most new source files should include a
<literal>&dollar;&os;&dollar;</literal> string in the
new file. On commit, <command>svn</command> will expand
<literal>&dollar;&os;&dollar;</literal> string near the start of the
file. On commit, <command>svn</command> will expand
the <literal>&dollar;&os;&dollar;</literal> string,
adding the file path, revision number, date and time of
commit, and the username of the committer. Files which