Clarity and punctuation improvements.

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Warren Block 2013-08-03 14:10:45 +00:00
parent 22227f0abb
commit 8df38f00ca
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=42491

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</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
<para>Subversion can be installed from the &os; Ports <para>Subversion can be installed from the &os; Ports
Collection, by issuing the following commands:</para> Collection by issuing these commands:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/devel/subversion</userinput> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/devel/subversion</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>make clean install</userinput></screen> &prompt.root; <userinput>make clean install</userinput></screen>
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<title>&os; Ports Tree Branches and Layout</title> <title>&os; Ports Tree Branches and Layout</title>
<para>In <literal>svn+ssh://svn.freebsd.org/ports</literal>, <para>In <literal>svn+ssh://svn.freebsd.org/ports</literal>,
<emphasis>ports</emphasis> refers repository root of the <emphasis>ports</emphasis> refers to the repository root of the
ports tree.</para> ports tree.</para>
<para>In general, most &os; port work will be done within <para>In general, most &os; port work will be done within
@ -710,8 +710,8 @@
<para>It is possible to anonymously check out the &os; <para>It is possible to anonymously check out the &os;
repository with Subversion. This will give access to a repository with Subversion. This will give access to a
read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed back
to. To do this, use the following command:</para> to the main repository. To do this, use the following command:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn co <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/base/head /usr/src</userinput></screen> <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn co <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/base/head /usr/src</userinput></screen>
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<note> <note>
<para>Most new source files should include a <para>Most new source files should include a
<literal>&dollar;&os;&dollar;</literal> string in the <literal>&dollar;&os;&dollar;</literal> string near the start of the
new file. On commit, <command>svn</command> will expand file. On commit, <command>svn</command> will expand
the <literal>&dollar;&os;&dollar;</literal> string, the <literal>&dollar;&os;&dollar;</literal> string,
adding the file path, revision number, date and time of adding the file path, revision number, date and time of
commit, and the username of the committer. Files which commit, and the username of the committer. Files which