From 8e36e964dd6e162cb6815ef725076e2b9cf06a5c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Rene Ladan Date: Mon, 24 Nov 2008 16:30:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Language fixes and correct a filename in an example. Approved by: remko (mentor) Obtained from: perforce No objections from: -doc --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml index be7cb1e411..efb492e802 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y &prompt.root; rm /var/db/pkg/pkgdb.db /usr/ports/INDEX-*.db &prompt.root; portupgrade -af - This has completed, finish the upgrade process with a + Once this has completed, finish the upgrade process with a final call to freebsd-update. Issue the following command to tie up all loose ends in the upgrade process: @@ -440,14 +440,14 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y kern.securelevel setting and storing the freebsd-update data on a read only file system when not in use, a better solution would be to - compare the system against a secure disk. Such as a + compare the system against a secure disk, such as a DVD or securely stored external USB disk device. The system will now be inspected, and a list of files - along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both known values - in the release and the current installed value. This is why + along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both the known value + in the release and the current installed value, will be printed. This is why the output has been sent to the outfile.ids file. It scrolls by too quickly for eye comparisons, and soon it fills up the console @@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y all files different from those in the release, issue the following command: - &prompt.root; cat update.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more + &prompt.root; cat outfile.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more /etc/master.passwd /etc/motd /etc/passwd @@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y The base system of &os; includes a utility for updating the Ports Collection too: the &man.portsnap.8; utility. Upon execution, it will connect to a remote site, verify the secure - key, and download a new copy of the ports collection. The key + key, and download a new copy of the Ports Collection. The key is used to verify the integrity of all downloaded files, ensuring they have not been modified in-flight. To download the latest Ports Collection files, issue the following command: