Two grammar fixes and a punctuation fix

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Christian Brueffer 2003-01-14 20:41:31 +00:00
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@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory disk</programlisting>
read-only. Remember that in <xref linkend="intro"> we detailed the
limitations of flash memory - specifically the limited write capability.
The importance of not mounting filesystems on flash media read-write,
and the importance of not using a swap file cannot be overstated. A
and the importance of not using a swap file, cannot be overstated. A
swap file on a busy system can burn through a piece of flash media in
less than one year. Heavy logging or temporary file creation and
destruction can do the same. Therefore, in addition to removing the
@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory disk</programlisting>
by pressing the <keycap>w</keycap> key (this is a hidden option on
this screen). When presented with a menu to choose a boot manager,
take care to select <literal>None</literal> if you are using an
M-Systems Disk-On-Chip. If you are using a ATA compatible compact
M-Systems Disk-On-Chip. If you are using an ATA compatible compact
flash card, you should choose the FreeBSD Boot Manager. Now press
the <keycap>q</keycap> key to quit the partition menu. You will be
shown the boot manager menu once more - repeat the choice you made
@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory disk</programlisting>
<para>To make it possible to enter a ports directory and successfully
run <command>make install</command>, it is necessary for the file
<filename>/var/db/port.mkversion</filename> to exist, and that it have
<filename>/var/db/port.mkversion</filename> to exist, and that it has
a correct date in it. Further, we must create a packages directory on
a non-memory filesystem that will keep track of our packages across
reboots. Because it is necessary to mount your filesystems as