Two grammar fixes and a punctuation fix

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Christian Brueffer 2003-01-14 20:41:31 +00:00
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read-only. Remember that in <xref linkend="intro"> we detailed the read-only. Remember that in <xref linkend="intro"> we detailed the
limitations of flash memory - specifically the limited write capability. limitations of flash memory - specifically the limited write capability.
The importance of not mounting filesystems on flash media read-write, The importance of not mounting filesystems on flash media read-write,
and the importance of not using a swap file cannot be overstated. A and the importance of not using a swap file, cannot be overstated. A
swap file on a busy system can burn through a piece of flash media in swap file on a busy system can burn through a piece of flash media in
less than one year. Heavy logging or temporary file creation and less than one year. Heavy logging or temporary file creation and
destruction can do the same. Therefore, in addition to removing the destruction can do the same. Therefore, in addition to removing the
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by pressing the <keycap>w</keycap> key (this is a hidden option on by pressing the <keycap>w</keycap> key (this is a hidden option on
this screen). When presented with a menu to choose a boot manager, this screen). When presented with a menu to choose a boot manager,
take care to select <literal>None</literal> if you are using an take care to select <literal>None</literal> if you are using an
M-Systems Disk-On-Chip. If you are using a ATA compatible compact M-Systems Disk-On-Chip. If you are using an ATA compatible compact
flash card, you should choose the FreeBSD Boot Manager. Now press flash card, you should choose the FreeBSD Boot Manager. Now press
the <keycap>q</keycap> key to quit the partition menu. You will be the <keycap>q</keycap> key to quit the partition menu. You will be
shown the boot manager menu once more - repeat the choice you made shown the boot manager menu once more - repeat the choice you made
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<para>To make it possible to enter a ports directory and successfully <para>To make it possible to enter a ports directory and successfully
run <command>make install</command>, it is necessary for the file run <command>make install</command>, it is necessary for the file
<filename>/var/db/port.mkversion</filename> to exist, and that it have <filename>/var/db/port.mkversion</filename> to exist, and that it has
a correct date in it. Further, we must create a packages directory on a correct date in it. Further, we must create a packages directory on
a non-memory filesystem that will keep track of our packages across a non-memory filesystem that will keep track of our packages across
reboots. Because it is necessary to mount your filesystems as reboots. Because it is necessary to mount your filesystems as