From 956ff9fc1ad1332b9f2a9a571de1c1c7d3890c08 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Bruce A. Mah" Date: Sat, 18 Jan 2003 01:41:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Try to reword the glue pages (if anybody reads these) so that they more accurately reflect why we have MD installation and hardware notes. Suggested by: ue --- en/releases/5.0R/hardware.sgml | 7 ++++--- en/releases/5.0R/installation.sgml | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/releases/5.0R/hardware.sgml b/en/releases/5.0R/hardware.sgml index d616b51da2..c405594258 100644 --- a/en/releases/5.0R/hardware.sgml +++ b/en/releases/5.0R/hardware.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -8,8 +8,9 @@ &header;

The hardware notes for FreeBSD are customized for different - platforms, as some of the changes made to FreeBSD apply only to - specific processor architectures.

+ platforms, as many devices are only supported (or are + only relevant for) + specific processors or architectures.

Hardware notes for FreeBSD 5.0-RELEASE are available for the following platforms:

diff --git a/en/releases/5.0R/installation.sgml b/en/releases/5.0R/installation.sgml index 4c63b1efe3..9f99ac3329 100644 --- a/en/releases/5.0R/installation.sgml +++ b/en/releases/5.0R/installation.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ &header;

The installation notes for FreeBSD are customized for different - platforms, as some of the changes made to FreeBSD apply only to - specific processor architectures.

+ platforms, as the procedures for installing FreeBSD are highly + dependent on the hardware platform.

Installation notes for FreeBSD 5.0-RELEASE are available for the following platforms: