From 9e43e7cf668e94b8cfd06a5b71aa2aa6b8d0e3a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Reword a bit a part which seemed confusing. Using shorter sentences here is probably better for non-native English speakers (like me). PR: docs/119463 Submitted by: Gregory Delfly, gregoryd.freebsd at free.fr --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml index b0b298a165..9905e19bb2 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml @@ -1797,9 +1797,9 @@ $%&'()*+,-./01234567 <programlisting>:if=/usr/local/libexec/psif:</programlisting> - <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability; - that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in - read-write mode.</para> + <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability. + When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application> + opens the printer in read-write mode.</para> <para>If you have a parallel &postscript; printer (and therefore cannot use two-way communication with the printer, which