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Minor grammar, clarity fixes in entries 900505, 1000006, 1000007

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of the __FreeBSD_version values table:
o fix a typo in 'and'
o add the serial comma to promote clarity
o remove a spurious comma from the end of a sentense

Reviewed by:	Isabell Long (the Oxford comma)
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Sergey Kandaurov 2012-06-20 06:10:16 +00:00
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@ -15301,7 +15301,7 @@ Reference: <http://www.freebsd.org/ports/portaudit/74a9541d-5d6c-11d8-80e3-00
<entry>March 13, 2012</entry>
<entry>9.0-STABLE after introduction of new tcp(4)
socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE,
TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev
TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev
<svnref>232945</svnref>).</entry>
</row>
@ -15359,7 +15359,7 @@ Reference: &lt;http://www.freebsd.org/ports/portaudit/74a9541d-5d6c-11d8-80e3-00
<entry>1000006</entry>
<entry>January 26, 2012</entry>
<entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of read capacity
data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer,
data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer
(rev <svnref>230590</svnref>).</entry>
</row>
@ -15368,7 +15368,7 @@ Reference: &lt;http://www.freebsd.org/ports/portaudit/74a9541d-5d6c-11d8-80e3-00
<entry>February 5, 2012</entry>
<entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of new tcp(4)
socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE,
TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev
TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev
<svnref>231025</svnref>).</entry>
</row>