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<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN" [
<!ENTITY base CDATA "..">
<!ENTITY date "$FreeBSD: www/en/projects/newbies.sgml,v 1.41 2005/03/01 18:43:43 ceri Exp $">
<!ENTITY date "$FreeBSD: www/en/projects/newbies.sgml,v 1.42 2005/09/02 06:41:50 jcamou Exp $">
<!ENTITY title 'Resources for Newbies'>
<!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes;
]>
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<ul>
<li><p>If you have not yet installed, look for the
<a href="&u.rel2.announce;">latest mainstream release</a>.
<a href="&u.rel.announce;">latest mainstream release</a>.
(See the Handbook for why you should <strong>not</strong> be tempted
by any of the other branches.) Before you begin, carefully read the
<a href="../doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">installation instructions</a>,
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href="../doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html">Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)</a> are the
main documents for FreeBSD. Essential reading, they contain a lot of
material for newbies as well as some pretty advanced stuff. Do not
worry if you cannot understand the advanced sections. The handbook
worry if you are unable to understand the advanced sections. The handbook
contains the installation instructions and also provides lists of
books and on line resources, and the FAQ has a troubleshooting
books and on-line resources, and the FAQ has a troubleshooting
section.</p></li>
<li><p>Join the FreeBSD-Questions mailing list to see the questions you
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<h2><a name="unix">Learning about &unix;</a></h2>
<p>Many of the problems we have as newbies come from being unfamiliar
with the UNIX commands needed to fix our FreeBSD problems.
with the UNIX commands, needed to fix our FreeBSD problems.
Without a UNIX background you will be faced with two things to learn
at once. Fortunately a lot of resources are available to make this
easier.</p>
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including FreeBSD. The documentation for X can be found at
<a href="http://www.xfree86.org/">The XFree86 Project, Inc</a>.
Beware, much of this documentation is reference material which is
likely to be difficult for newcomers to digest.</p>
more likely to be difficult for newcomers to digest.</p>
<ul>
<li><p>For basic information about installing, configuring and using the
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<a href="../docproj/docproj.html">Documentation Project</a> as reviewers.
Other FreeBSD newbies might have particular skills and experiences to
share, either computer related or not, or just want to meet new
newbies and make them feel welcome. There is always people around
newbies and make them feel welcome. There are always people around
who help others simply because they like to. Write to
<a href="mailto:freebsd-newbies@FreeBSD.org">FreeBSD Newbies</a>
for more information.</p>
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consider using your old FreeBSD CDs to create some more :-)</p>
<p><a href="../usergroups.html">User groups</a> are
good places to meet other FreeBSD users. If there is not one nearby,
good places to meet other FreeBSD users. If there is no one nearby,
you might consider starting one!</p>
<p>Before talking to real humans about your new skills, you might