o Grammar fixes

o Fix various incorrect uses of apostrophes
o Fix an instance of uppercasing where emphasis tags are more appropriate
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Ceri Davies 2004-11-08 18:36:55 +00:00
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commit a2f3dc1df9
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@ -1759,7 +1759,7 @@ sectors/track: 63</screen>
supplied this way to get around certain limitations in
&ms-dos;) and the disk capacity is more than 1GB, use M
cylinders, 63 sectors per track (<emphasis>not</emphasis>
64), and 255 heads, where 'M' is the disk capacity in MB
64), and 255 heads, where <literal>M</literal> is the disk capacity in MB
divided by 7.844238 (!). So our example 2GB drive would
have 261 cylinders, 63 sectors per track and 255
heads.</para>
@ -3221,10 +3221,10 @@ ARRE (Auto Read Reallocation Enbld): 1</programlisting>
the disk drive controller card and BIOS handle the task of
locking out bad sectors. This is fine for operating systems
like DOS that use BIOS code to access the disk. However,
FreeBSD's disk driver does not go through BIOS, therefore a
FreeBSD's disk driver does not go through the BIOS, therefore a
mechanism, bad144, exists that replaces this functionality.
bad144 only works with the wd driver (which means it is not
supported in FreeBSD 4.0), it is NOT able to be used with SCSI.
supported in FreeBSD 4.0), it is <emphasis>not</emphasis> able to be used with SCSI.
bad144 works by entering all bad sectors found into a special
file.</para>
@ -4007,7 +4007,7 @@ quit</programlisting>
match and then fail due to resource conflicts. So, it
disables the programmable cards first so this double probing
cannot happen. It also means that it needs to know the PnP
id's for supported PnP hardware. Making this more user
ids for supported PnP hardware. Making this more user
tweakable is on the TODO list.</para>
</blockquote>
@ -5069,7 +5069,7 @@ kern.timecounter.hardware: TSC -&gt; i8254</screen>
consumed by the FreeBSD sources and additional maintenance work.
Thus, it is much easier for both the developers and users to
keep CVSup as a separate port, which can be easily installed as
a package bundled on the FreeBSD installation CD's.</para>
a package bundled on the FreeBSD installation CDs.</para>
</answer>
</qandaentry>
@ -5207,7 +5207,7 @@ kern.timecounter.hardware: TSC -&gt; i8254</screen>
A. Welsh, available at <ulink
url="http://www.stardate.bc.ca/eawpatches/html/default.htm"></ulink>.
After timidity++ has been installed properly, midi files may
be converted to wav's with the following command
be converted to wav files with the following command
line:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>timidity -Ow -s 44100 -o /tmp/juke/01.wav 01.mid</userinput></screen>
@ -5410,11 +5410,11 @@ device sio5 at isa? port 0x2b8 tty flags 0x501 vector siointr</programlisting>
<qandaentry>
<question id="scheduler-kern-quantum">
<para>What is 'kern.quantum'?</para>
<para>What is <literal>kern.quantum</literal>?</para>
</question>
<answer>
<para><quote>kern.quantum</quote> is the maximum number of
<para><literal>kern.quantum</literal> is the maximum number of
ticks a process can run without being preempted. It is
specific to the 4BSD scheduler, so you can use its
presence or absence to determine which scheduler is in
@ -6624,7 +6624,7 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for messaging</programlisting>
<qandaentry>
<question id="sendmail-alternative">
<para>What other mail-server software can I use, instead of
<para>What other mail-server software can I use instead of
Sendmail?</para>
</question>
@ -6634,12 +6634,12 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for messaging</programlisting>
easily replace it with one of the other MTA (for instance,
an MTA installed from the ports).</para>
<para>There are various alternative MTA's in the ports tree
<para>There are various alternative MTAs in the ports tree
already, with <filename
role="package">mail/exim</filename>, <filename
role="package">mail/postfix</filename>, <filename
role="package">mail/qmail</filename>, <filename
role="package">mail/zmailer</filename>, being some of the
role="package">mail/qmail</filename>, and <filename
role="package">mail/zmailer</filename> being some of the
most popular choices.</para>
<para>Diversity is nice, and the fact that you have many
@ -6649,7 +6649,7 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for messaging</programlisting>
Qmail?</quote> in the mailing lists. If you do feel like
asking, first check the mailing list archives. The
advantages and disadvantages of each and every one of the
available MTA's have already been discussed a few
available MTAs have already been discussed a few
times.</para>
</answer>
</qandaentry>
@ -6660,7 +6660,7 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for messaging</programlisting>
do I do?</para>
</question><answer>
<para>Do not Panic! Simply restart the system, type
<para>Do not panic! Simply restart the system, type
<userinput>boot -s</userinput> at the Boot: prompt (just
<userinput>-s</userinput> for FreeBSD releases before 3.2) to
enter Single User mode. At the question about the shell to use,
@ -6682,8 +6682,8 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for messaging</programlisting>
<answer>
<para>If you are using syscons (the default console driver)
build and install a new kernel with the following
option.</para>
build and install a new kernel with the
line</para>
<programlisting>options SC_DISABLE_REBOOT</programlisting>
@ -7099,7 +7099,7 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for messaging</programlisting>
where they maintain their data, but can often be
immediately reused (either with their old association,
or reused with a new association.) There can be certain
immediate transition from active to 'cache' state if the
immediate transitions from <literal>active</literal> to <literal>cache</literal> state if the
page is known to be clean (unmodified), but that
transition is a matter of policy, depending upon the
algorithm choice of the VM system
@ -7118,24 +7118,24 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for messaging</programlisting>
</itemizedlist>
<para>Pages are most often written to disk (sort of a VM
sync) when they are in the 'inactive' state, but 'active'
sync) when they are in the inactive state, but active
pages can also be synced (but requires the
availability of certain CPU features.) This depends upon
the CPU tracking of the 'modified' bit being available,
the CPU tracking of the modified bit being available,
and in certain situations there can be an advantage for a
block of VM pages to be synced, whether they are active or
inactive. In most common cases, it is best to think of
the 'inactive' queue to be a queue of relatively unused
the inactive queue to be a queue of relatively unused
pages that might or might not be in the process of being
written to disk. 'Cached' pages are already 'synced', not
written to disk. Cached pages are already synced, not
mapped, but available for immediate process use with their
old association or with a new association. Free pages are
available at interrupt level, but cached or free pages can
be used at process state for reuse. Cache pages aren't
be used at process state for reuse. Cache pages are not
adequately locked to be available at interrupt
level.</para>
<para>There are some other flags (e.g. Busy flag or busy
<para>There are some other flags (e.g., busy flag or busy
count) that might modify some of the rules that I
described.</para>
</answer>
@ -8340,7 +8340,7 @@ Key F15 A A Menu Workplace Nop</programlisting>
</question>
<answer>
<para>Typically, people who ask this question have two PC's
<para>Typically, people who ask this question have two PCs
at home, one with FreeBSD and one with some version of
&windows; the idea is to use the FreeBSD box to connect to
the Internet and then be able to access the Internet from
@ -8959,7 +8959,7 @@ Key F15 A A Menu Workplace Nop</programlisting>
<qandaentry>
<question id="cvsup-missing-libs">
<para>I've just installed CVSup but trying to execute it
<para>I have just installed CVSup but trying to execute it
produces errors. What is wrong?</para>
</question>
@ -11741,7 +11741,7 @@ raisechar=^^</programlisting>
it is part of standard practise to send data to the screen
of interesting variety to keep all the pixies that make up
your picture happy. Screen pixies (commonly mis-typed or
re-named as 'pixels') are categorised by the type of hat
re-named as <quote>pixels</quote> are categorised by the type of hat
they wear (red, green or blue) and will hide or appear
(thereby showing the colour of their hat) whenever they
receive a little piece of food. Video cards turn data into