From a3b77aea99474c0cd31af4a17aa7f304f3e83af9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jim Mock Date: Sat, 4 Aug 2001 19:32:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Add periods to the ends of the sentences in the list in the introduction. While I'm at it, change "dipped in to" to "read" in the system administration intro. Also reword the first sentence to read a little better. --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml index 16fbb9f76c..8817580534 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ - Introduce you to FreeBSD + Introduce you to FreeBSD. - Guide you through the installation process + Guide you through the installation process. - Teach you some Unix basics + Teach you some Unix basics. Show you how to install the wealth of third party - applications available for FreeBSD + applications available for FreeBSD. Introduce you to X, the Unix windowing system, and detail how to configure a desktop environment that makes you - more productive + more productive. @@ -151,12 +151,12 @@ The remaining chapters of the FreeBSD Handbook cover all - aspects of system administration with FreeBSD. Each chapter + aspects of FreeBSD system administration. Each chapter starts by describing what you will learn as a result of reading the chapter, and also details what you are expected to know before tackling the material. - These chapters are designed to be dipped in to as and when + These chapters are designed to be read when you need the information. You do not have to read them in any particular order, nor do you need to read all of them before you can begin using FreeBSD.