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- The Mesa ports were updated to 10.6.8. At the same time the
+ The Mesa ports were updated to 10.6.8. At the same time, the
ports received a major overhaul to make sure all ports are
correctly configured.
- Also the dual version support was removed, there is only one
- mesa version for all supported FreeBSD versions.
+ Also the dual version support was removed; there is only one
+ mesa version for all supported &os; versions.
The libosmesa port was merged into the Mesa framework. Another big item that was included in the Mesa port was
- OpenCL. There are two GPU based OpenCL implimentations
- namely:
- lang/clover for supported Radeon cards and
+ Another big item that was included in the Mesa port is
+ OpenCL. There are two GPU-based OpenCL implementations:
+ lang/clover for supported Radeon cards, and
lang/beignet for supported Intel cards (currently only
Ivybridge).
- Thanks go to Johannes Dieterich, O. Hartman, and Koop Mast
+ Thanks go to Johannes Dieterich, O. Hartmann, and Koop Mast
for making this happen. Now that Mesa is up-to-date, we can do the same with the
- X.Org server.
- Currently at 1.14, an update to 1.17 is ready.
+ Now that Mesa is up-to-date, we can apply the same update
+ procedure to the X.Org server. It is currently at 1.14,
+ and an update to 1.17 is ready.
It should be committed shortly. On the kernel side progress has been made with the
+ On the kernel side, progress has been made with the
i915 update. The driver is able to attach.
There are some reports that the X.Org server starts, but Mesa
- is unhappy so acceleration doesn't work yet.
+ is unhappy so acceleration does not work yet.
If you want to test, instructions will be posted on the wiki,
in the i915 update article (see links).
- At this stage, we can only accept patches though, we won't be
+ At this stage, we can only accept patches, though — we won't be
able to provide support. We attended two conferences: XDC 2015 in Toronto and
EuroBSDcon 2015 in Stockholm.
- Reports will be posted on the blog.
See the "Graphics" wiki page for up-to-date information.
+