This first patch addresses the following:

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- rewording to remove you/we/please/simply/etc./i.e./as well as

- one &os; replacement

- reword sections that mention ISA

- some rewording for redundancy; some areas weren't touched as they need to be completely rewritten

- some ACPI/APM fixups

Approved by:  gjb (mentor)

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