From ace0a6eca0e9acdf7fa0e970ee5eb076cd2c4ad9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Christian Brueffer Date: Mon, 17 Jul 2006 10:09:26 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Some typo and grammar fixes. --- en/news/status/report-2006-04-2006-06.xml | 32 ++++++++++----------- en/news/status/report-apr-2006-jun-2006.xml | 32 ++++++++++----------- 2 files changed, 32 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/news/status/report-2006-04-2006-06.xml b/en/news/status/report-2006-04-2006-06.xml index 8c4ad31a67..b7d41901b9 100644 --- a/en/news/status/report-2006-04-2006-06.xml +++ b/en/news/status/report-2006-04-2006-06.xml @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ and hope to receive a status report from you next time.

-

Thanks to all reporters for your excellent work and timing!. Enjoy +

Thanks to all reporters for your excellent work and timing! Enjoy reading.

@@ -660,14 +660,14 @@

GJournal is a GEOM class which provides journaling for GEOM - providers. It can also be used to journal various file system with + providers. It can also be used to journal various file systems with just a minimal filesystem-specific portion of code. Currently only UFS journaling is implemented on top of gjournal. Being filesystem-independent and operating below the file system level, gjournal has no way to distinguish data from metadata, thus it - journal both. One of the nice things about gjournal is that it + journals both. One of the nice things about gjournal is that it works reliable even on disks with enabled write cache, which is - often not the case for journalled file system. And remember... fsck + often not the case for journalled file systems. And remember... fsck no more.

@@ -709,7 +709,7 @@ example 4 MB) and allocated (committed) to the virtual device on as-needed basis.

-

Development has started and progressing as planned (though a +

Development has started and is progressing as planned (though a little bit slow). Metadata format and virtual storage allocation formats have been defined and more serious coding is in progress.

@@ -1100,7 +1100,7 @@ much Hungarian resource to make these up to date. There's a rendering issue when browsing the pages with - JavaScipt enabled, but this can be server-side for me, this should + JavaScript enabled, but this can be server-side for me, this should be investigated as well. @@ -1176,7 +1176,7 @@ -

Mohan Srinivas committed his changes to make the NFSv2/3 client +

Mohan Srinivasan committed his changes to make the NFSv2/3 client MP safe to HEAD this quarter. Changes may be back-ported to 6.x soon.

@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ unfixed PRs against the legacy client (NFSv2/3). These are at the top of his priority list. Robert is also interested in making NFSv4-style ACLs the lingua franca for FreeBSD file systems. There - was some discussion about integrating Rick Maclem's NFSv4 server + was some discussion about integrating Rick MacKlem's NFSv4 server into 7.x.

Chuck Lever became a full source committer during this @@ -1872,7 +1872,7 @@ -

The wireless suport has been stable for a while so most work has +

The wireless support has been stable for a while so most work has focused on bug fixing and improving legacy drivers.

Max Laier and I worked on improving support for Intel wireless @@ -1967,18 +1967,18 @@ together with a fast interrupt model dedicated to particular driver handlers that don't block on locks (i.e. serial port, clock, etcetc). Unfortunately, even if the interrupt thread model proved - to be a reliable solutions, its performance were not on par with + to be a reliable solution, its performance was not on par with the pre SMPng era (4.x), and thus others solutions were investigated, with interrupt filtering being one of that.

-

As part of my Summer of Code 2006 work, i'm implementing +

As part of my Summer of Code 2006 work, I'm implementing interrupt filtering for FreeBSD, and when the framework will be in - place i'll compare the performance of filters, against all the + place I'll compare the performance of filters, against all the previous models: pre-SMPng(4.x), ithread and polling.

-

The most important modifications to the src tree so far where: +

The most important modifications to the src tree so far were:

diff --git a/en/news/status/report-apr-2006-jun-2006.xml b/en/news/status/report-apr-2006-jun-2006.xml index 8c4ad31a67..b7d41901b9 100644 --- a/en/news/status/report-apr-2006-jun-2006.xml +++ b/en/news/status/report-apr-2006-jun-2006.xml @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ and hope to receive a status report from you next time.

-

Thanks to all reporters for your excellent work and timing!. Enjoy +

Thanks to all reporters for your excellent work and timing! Enjoy reading.

@@ -660,14 +660,14 @@

GJournal is a GEOM class which provides journaling for GEOM - providers. It can also be used to journal various file system with + providers. It can also be used to journal various file systems with just a minimal filesystem-specific portion of code. Currently only UFS journaling is implemented on top of gjournal. Being filesystem-independent and operating below the file system level, gjournal has no way to distinguish data from metadata, thus it - journal both. One of the nice things about gjournal is that it + journals both. One of the nice things about gjournal is that it works reliable even on disks with enabled write cache, which is - often not the case for journalled file system. And remember... fsck + often not the case for journalled file systems. And remember... fsck no more.

@@ -709,7 +709,7 @@ example 4 MB) and allocated (committed) to the virtual device on as-needed basis.

-

Development has started and progressing as planned (though a +

Development has started and is progressing as planned (though a little bit slow). Metadata format and virtual storage allocation formats have been defined and more serious coding is in progress.

@@ -1100,7 +1100,7 @@ much Hungarian resource to make these up to date. There's a rendering issue when browsing the pages with - JavaScipt enabled, but this can be server-side for me, this should + JavaScript enabled, but this can be server-side for me, this should be investigated as well. @@ -1176,7 +1176,7 @@ -

Mohan Srinivas committed his changes to make the NFSv2/3 client +

Mohan Srinivasan committed his changes to make the NFSv2/3 client MP safe to HEAD this quarter. Changes may be back-ported to 6.x soon.

@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ unfixed PRs against the legacy client (NFSv2/3). These are at the top of his priority list. Robert is also interested in making NFSv4-style ACLs the lingua franca for FreeBSD file systems. There - was some discussion about integrating Rick Maclem's NFSv4 server + was some discussion about integrating Rick MacKlem's NFSv4 server into 7.x.

Chuck Lever became a full source committer during this @@ -1872,7 +1872,7 @@ -

The wireless suport has been stable for a while so most work has +

The wireless support has been stable for a while so most work has focused on bug fixing and improving legacy drivers.

Max Laier and I worked on improving support for Intel wireless @@ -1967,18 +1967,18 @@ together with a fast interrupt model dedicated to particular driver handlers that don't block on locks (i.e. serial port, clock, etcetc). Unfortunately, even if the interrupt thread model proved - to be a reliable solutions, its performance were not on par with + to be a reliable solution, its performance was not on par with the pre SMPng era (4.x), and thus others solutions were investigated, with interrupt filtering being one of that.

-

As part of my Summer of Code 2006 work, i'm implementing +

As part of my Summer of Code 2006 work, I'm implementing interrupt filtering for FreeBSD, and when the framework will be in - place i'll compare the performance of filters, against all the + place I'll compare the performance of filters, against all the previous models: pre-SMPng(4.x), ithread and polling.

-

The most important modifications to the src tree so far where: +

The most important modifications to the src tree so far were: