This is a very large chapter that needs a lot of work, many more patches to come.
This patch does the following to mostly the NIS section: - comments out authors - fixes some (not all) acronym tags and &os; entities - tightens up some headings - some word-smithing to make things clearer - adds title to Table This will be followed by a white-space fix, then more content patches to be followed by a more thorough technical review.
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