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Avoid excessive use of "also" and split a sentence in two smaller parts.

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change history, or logs. We in the FreeBSD Project greatly
value the change history that CVS gives to the project.</para>
<para>CVS reference information, tutorials, and FAQs can also be found at:
<ulink
url="http://www.cvshome.org/docs/">http://www.cvshome.org/docs/</ulink>,
and the information in <ulink url="http://cvsbook.red-bean.com/cvsbook.html">Karl Fogel's
chapters from <quote>Open Source Development with CVS</quote></ulink> are also very
<para>CVS reference information, tutorials, and FAQs can be found at:
<ulink url="http://www.cvshome.org/docs/">http://www.cvshome.org/docs/</ulink>.
The information in <ulink url="http://cvsbook.red-bean.com/cvsbook.html">Karl Fogel's
chapters from <quote>Open Source Development with CVS</quote></ulink> is also very
useful.</para>
<para>&a.des; also supplied the following <quote>mini primer</quote> for
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<para>You will almost certainly get a conflict because
of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.163 2003-03-29 13:30:34 nik Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case,
of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.164 2003-04-10 23:40:43 keramida Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case,
<literal>$<!-- stop expansion -->FreeBSD<!-- stop expansion -->$</literal>)
lines, so you will have to edit the file to resolve the conflict
(remove the marker lines and the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.163 2003-03-29 13:30:34 nik Exp $</literal> line,
leaving the original <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.163 2003-03-29 13:30:34 nik Exp $</literal> line intact).</para>
(remove the marker lines and the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.164 2003-04-10 23:40:43 keramida Exp $</literal> line,
leaving the original <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.164 2003-04-10 23:40:43 keramida Exp $</literal> line intact).</para>
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