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@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
Synopsis
FreeBSD uses XFree86 to provide users with a powerful
- graphical user interface. XFree86 is a open-source
+ graphical user interface. XFree86 is an open-source
implementation of the X Window System. This chapter
will cover installation and configuration of XFree86 on a
FreeBSD system. For more information on XFree86 and
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
MacOS.
It is not necessary to understand all of the details of various
- X components and how they interact, however, some basic knowledge makes
+ X components and how they interact; however, some basic knowledge makes
it possible to take advantage of X's strengths.
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@
detection does not work correctly.
Video memory on the graphic adapter determines the
- resolution and color depth the system can run at. This is
+ resolution and color depth which the system can run at. This is
important to know so the user knows the limitations of the
system.
@@ -367,12 +367,12 @@
The next step is to test the existing
configuration to verify that XFree86
can work with the graphics
- hardware on the target system. To preform this task, the user
+ hardware on the target system. To perform this task, the user
needs to run:
&prompt.root; XFree86 -xf86config XF86Config.new
- If a black and grey grid and an X mouse cursor appears, then
+ If a black and grey grid and an X mouse cursor appear,
the configuration was successful. To exit the test, just press
Ctrl
@@ -383,8 +383,8 @@
XFree86 4 Tuning
Next, tune the XF86Config.new
- configuration file to taste. Open up the file in a text editor such
- as &man.emacs.1; or &man.ee.1;. The first thing to do is add the
+ configuration file to taste. Open the file in a text editor such
+ as &man.emacs.1; or &man.ee.1;. First, add the
frequencies for the target system's monitor. These are usually
expressed as a horizontal and vertical synchronization rate. These
values are added to the XF86Config.new file
@@ -394,17 +394,17 @@
Identifier "Monitor0"
VendorName "Monitor Vendor"
ModelName "Monitor Model"
- Horizsync 30-107
+ HorizSync 30-107
VertRefresh 48-120
EndSection
- The Horizsync and
+ The HorizSync and
VertRefresh keywords may not exist in the
configuration file. If they do not, they need to be added, with
the correct horizontal synchronization rate placed after the
Horizsync keyword and the vertical
synchronization rate after the VertRefresh
- keyword. In the example above the target monitor's rates where
+ keyword. In the example above the target monitor's rates were
entered.
X allows DPMS (Energy Star) features to be used with capable
@@ -421,8 +421,8 @@ EndSection
While the XF86Config.new
- configuration file is still open in an editor, next select what
- the default resolution and color depth is desired. This is
+ configuration file is still open in an editor, select
+ the default resolution and color depth desired. This is
defined in the Screen section:
Section "Screen"
@@ -440,24 +440,24 @@ EndSection
the color depth to run at by default. This can be overridden
with the -bpp command line switch to
&man.XFree86.1;
- The Modes keyword
+ The Modes keyword
describes the resolution to run at for the given color depth.
- In the example above, the default color depth is twenty four
+ In the example above, the default color depth is twenty-four
bits per pixel. At this color depth, the accepted resolution is
- one thousand twenty four pixels by seven hundred and sixty eight
+ one thousand twenty-four pixels by seven hundred and sixty-eight
pixels.
- To run at a resolution of one thousand twenty four pixels by
- seven hundred sixty eight pixels at twenty four bits per pixel,
- then add the DefaultDepth keyword with the
- value of twenty four, and add to the "Display"
- subsection with the desired Depth the Modes keyword with the
+ To run at a resolution of one thousand twenty-four pixels by
+ seven hundred sixty-eight pixels at twenty-four bits per pixel,
+ add the DefaultDepth keyword with the
+ value of twenty-four, and add to the "Display"
+ subsection with the desired Depth the Modes keyword with the
resolution the user wishes to run at. Note that only VESA
standard modes are supported as defined by the target system's
graphics hardware.
- Finally, write out the configuration file and test it using
- the test mode given above. If all is well, then the configuration
+ Finally, write the configuration file and test it using
+ the test mode given above. If all is well, the configuration
file needs to be installed in a common location where
&man.XFree86.1;
can find it.
@@ -486,7 +486,7 @@ EndSection
Configuration with Intel i810 integrated chipsets
requires the agpgart
AGP programming interface for XFree86
- to drive the card. To agpgart,
+ to drive the card. To use agpgart,
the agp.ko kernel loadable module needs to
be loaded into the kernel with &man.kldload.8;. This can be
done automatically with the &man.loader.8; at boot time.
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ EndSection
&prompt.root; cd /dev
&prompt.root; sh MAKEDEV agpgart
- This will allow configuration the hardware as any other
+ This will allow configuration of the hardware as any other
graphics board.
If you are using XFree86 4.1.0 (or later) and messages
@@ -801,9 +801,9 @@ match any family == "LuciduxMono" edit family =+ "Lucidux Mono";ttyv8 "/usr/X11R6/bin/xdm -nodaemon" xterm off secure
- By default this entry is disabled, and in order to enable it
+ By default this entry is disabled; in order to enable it
change field 5 from off to
- on and then restart &man.init.8; using the
+ on and restart &man.init.8; using the
directions in . The first field, the
name of the terminal this program will manage, is
ttyv8. This means that
@@ -972,7 +972,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0
comments in app-defaults files begin with a !
character, not the usual #
. More strict
access controls may be desired. Look at the example
- entries in Xaccess file, and refer to the
+ entries in Xaccess, and refer to the
&man.xdm.1; manual page.
@@ -1006,8 +1006,8 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0
This section describes the different desktop environments
available for X on FreeBSD. A desktop environment
- will mean anything ranging from a simple window manager, to a
- complete suite of desktop applications such as
+ can mean anything ranging from a simple window manager to a
+ complete suite of desktop applications, such as
KDE or GNOME.
@@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0
The easiest way to install
GNOME is through the
Desktop Configuration
menu during the FreeBSD
- installation process as described in Chapter 2. They can also
+ installation process as described in Chapter 2. It can also
be easily installed from a package or the ports
collection:
@@ -1100,7 +1100,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0
/usr/X11R6/share/doc/gdkxft/README file
carefully.
- Then, all that is needed is to do is tell gtk
+ Then, all that is needed is to tell gtk
applications to look for their font-rendering functions in
libgdkxft.so before looking in the
standard place, libgdk.so. This is
@@ -1179,7 +1179,7 @@ export LD_PRELOAD
Installing KDE2
- Just like with GNOME or any
+ Just as with GNOME or any
other desktop environment, the easiest way to install
KDE is through the Desktop
Configuration
menu during the FreeBSD installation
@@ -1205,11 +1205,11 @@ export LD_PRELOAD
&prompt.user; echo "/usr/local/bin/startkde" > ~/.xinitrc
- Now, whenever invoke X Window System with startx,
+ Now, whenever the X Window System is invoked with startx,
KDE2 will be the desktop.
If a display manager such as
- xdm is being used, then
+ xdm is being used, the
configuration is slightly different. Edit the
.xsession file instead. Instructions
for kdm are described later in