Clean up after the last commit. Improve grammar, add a missing word (1).
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<listitem>Combined, these systems process about 1.5 trillion
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U.S. dollars per year and growing. They are using X11,
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Apache, jails, perl, and a lot of other free
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Apache, jails, Perl, and a lot of other free
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software.</listitem>
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<listitem>Factors that help:
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<listitem>Stability</listitem>
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<listitem>Source availability for helping understand and fix
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problems that occur (sometimes having the source to the
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problems that occur (having the source to the
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system helps you understand why your application does not
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do what you expect..)</listitem>
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do what you expect)</listitem>
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<listitem>Good performance</listitem>
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<listitem>Easy hardware upgrade paths</listitem>
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<listitem>PC hardware sometimes is less perfect, but at PC
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hardware prices, hot spares are practical.</listitem>
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<listitem>The application is spread over many servers.
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Need more power in one part? Add more Freebsd boxes.</listitem>
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Need more power in one part? Add more FreeBSD boxes.</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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</listitem>
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<para>PC hardware sometimes is less than perfect, but at PC
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hardware prices, hot spares are practical.</para>
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</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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</foil>
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US serving content to millions of cable and satellite
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customers.</listitem>
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<listitem>BSD License makes these commercial embedded
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<listitem>The BSD license makes these commercial embedded
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applications possible.</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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