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Clean up after the last commit. Improve grammar, add a missing word (1).

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Murray Stokely 2004-09-08 09:37:18 +00:00
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<listitem>Combined, these systems process about 1.5 trillion <listitem>Combined, these systems process about 1.5 trillion
U.S. dollars per year and growing. They are using X11, U.S. dollars per year and growing. They are using X11,
Apache, jails, perl, and a lot of other free Apache, jails, Perl, and a lot of other free
software.</listitem> software.</listitem>
<listitem>Factors that help: <listitem>Factors that help:
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<listitem>Stability</listitem> <listitem>Stability</listitem>
<listitem>Source availability for helping understand and fix <listitem>Source availability for helping understand and fix
problems that occur (sometimes having the source to the problems that occur (having the source to the
system helps you understand why your application does not system helps you understand why your application does not
do what you expect..)</listitem> do what you expect)</listitem>
<listitem>Good performance</listitem> <listitem>Good performance</listitem>
<listitem>Easy hardware upgrade paths</listitem> <listitem>Easy hardware upgrade paths</listitem>
<listitem>PC hardware sometimes is less perfect, but at PC
hardware prices, hot spares are practical.</listitem>
<listitem>The application is spread over many servers. <listitem>The application is spread over many servers.
Need more power in one part? Add more Freebsd boxes.</listitem> Need more power in one part? Add more FreeBSD boxes.</listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
<para>PC hardware sometimes is less than perfect, but at PC
hardware prices, hot spares are practical.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
</foil> </foil>
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US serving content to millions of cable and satellite US serving content to millions of cable and satellite
customers.</listitem> customers.</listitem>
<listitem>BSD License makes these commercial embedded <listitem>The BSD license makes these commercial embedded
applications possible.</listitem> applications possible.</listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>