- Improve wording in the recent addition by removing redundant parts

Spotted by: danfe
svn path=/head/; revision=36136
2010-07-29 14:44:44 +00:00 · 2010-07-29 14:44:44 +00:00 · b48c1ff9ef · 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
commit b48c1ff9ef
parent c2b3288917
1 changed files with 3 additions and 3 deletions
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
@ -2822,9 +2822,9 @@ hw.acpi.s4bios: 0</screen>
 	  (e.g., losing firmware state, device watchdog time out, and
 	  retrying forever).  Note that the system will not really enter
 	  <literal>S3</literal> state, which means devices may not lose
-	  power at all.  It also means some devices may not lose power,
-	  and many will work even if suspend/resume methods are totally
-	  missing, unlike real <literal>S3</literal> state.</para>
+	  power, and many will work fine even if suspend/resume methods
+	  are totally missing, unlike real <literal>S3</literal>
+	  state.</para>

 	<para>Harder cases require additional hardware, i.e., serial
 	  port/cable for serial console or Firewire port/cable for