Fix filesystem and use of "just" and "simply".

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Dru Lavigne 2014-04-24 21:46:37 +00:00
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commit b48c243c1e
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
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<emphasis>not</emphasis> a regular file. It is an
<emphasis>image</emphasis> of the complete contents of
the memory stick. It <emphasis>cannot</emphasis>
simply be copied like a regular file, but must be
be copied like a regular file, but must be
written directly to the target device with
&man.dd.1;:</para>
@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</screen>
<calloutlist>
<callout arearefs="bsdinstall-prompt-single">
<para>This is the prompt used on systems with just one
<para>This is the prompt used on systems with one
CPU.</para>
</callout>
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</mediaobject>
</figure>
<para>The entire disk can be allocated to &os;, or just a
portion of it. If
<para>The entire disk or a portion of it can be allocated to &os;.
If
<guibutton>[&nbsp;Entire&nbsp;Disk&nbsp;]</guibutton> is
chosen, a general partition layout filling the whole disk is
created. Selecting
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<listitem>
<para><literal>freebsd-ufs</literal> - A &os; UFS
filesystem.</para>
file system.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
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of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition
types.</para>
<para>Multiple filesystem partitions can be used, and some
<para>Multiple file system partitions can be used, and some
people may prefer a traditional layout with separate
partitions for the <filename>/</filename>,
<filename>/var</filename>, <filename>/tmp</filename>, and
<filename>/usr</filename> filesystems. See
<filename>/usr</filename> file systems. See
<xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an
example.</para>
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</tip>
<para>A mountpoint is needed if this partition will contain a
filesystem. If only a single UFS partition will be created,
file system. If only a single UFS partition will be created,
the mountpoint should be <filename>/</filename>.</para>
<para>A <emphasis>label</emphasis> is also requested. A label
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in <filename>/dev/</filename>.</para>
<tip>
<para>Use a unique label on every filesystem to avoid
<para>Use a unique label on every file system to avoid
conflicts from identical labels. A few letters from the
computer's name, use, or location can be added to the label.
For instance, <literal>labroot</literal> or
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</tip>
<example xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs">
<title>Creating Traditional Split Filesystem
<title>Creating Traditional Split File System
Partitions</title>
<para>For a traditional partition layout where the
<filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>,
<filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>
directories are separate filesystems on their own
directories are separate file systems on their own
partitions, create a GPT partitioning scheme, then create
the partitions as shown. Partition sizes shown are typical
for a 20G target disk. If more space is available on the
@ -2909,7 +2909,8 @@ login:</screen>
<title>&os; Shutdown</title>
<para>Proper shutdown of a &os; computer helps protect data and
even hardware from damage. Do not just turn off the power.
even hardware from damage. Do not turn off the power before
the system has been properly shut down.
If the user is a member of the
<systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group, become
the superuser by typing <command>su</command> at the command