Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

Reviewed by:	gabor
Approved by:	wblock
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Eitan Adler 2012-02-20 00:50:52 +00:00
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<sect2>
<title>Securing the Kernel Core, Raw Devices, and
File systems</title>
File Systems</title>
<para>If an attacker breaks <username>root</username> he can do
just about anything, but there are certain conveniences. For
@ -1879,8 +1879,8 @@ Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title><application>Kerberos</application> enabling a server
with Heimdal services</title>
<title><application>Kerberos</application> Enabling a Server
with Heimdal Services</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>Kerberos5</primary>
@ -1989,7 +1989,7 @@ kadmin><userinput> exit</userinput></screen>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title><application>Kerberos</application> enabling a client
<title><application>Kerberos</application> Enabling a Client
with Heimdal</title>
<indexterm>
@ -2040,7 +2040,7 @@ kadmin><userinput> exit</userinput></screen>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>User configuration files: <filename>.k5login</filename>
<title>User Configuration Files: <filename>.k5login</filename>
and <filename>.k5users</filename></title>
<indexterm>
@ -2237,7 +2237,7 @@ jdoe@example.org</screen>
<sect2>
<title>Differences with the <acronym>MIT</acronym>
port</title>
Port</title>
<para>The major difference between the <acronym>MIT</acronym>
and Heimdal installs relates to the
@ -2292,7 +2292,7 @@ kadmind5_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Mitigating limitations found in
<title>Mitigating Limitations Found in
<application>Kerberos</application></title>
<indexterm>
@ -2316,8 +2316,8 @@ kadmind5_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
</sect3>
<sect3>
<title><application>Kerberos</application> is intended for
single-user workstations</title>
<title><application>Kerberos</application> is Intended for
Single-User Workstations</title>
<para>In a multi-user environment,
<application>Kerberos</application> is less secure.
@ -2337,7 +2337,7 @@ kadmind5_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
</sect3>
<sect3>
<title>The KDC is a single point of failure</title>
<title>The KDC is a Single Point of Failure</title>
<para>By design, the <acronym>KDC</acronym> must be as
secure as the master password database is contained on it.
@ -3185,7 +3185,7 @@ racoon_enable="yes"</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Enabling sshd</title>
<title>Enabling <application>sshd</application></title>
<indexterm>
<primary>OpenSSH</primary>
@ -3307,7 +3307,7 @@ COPYRIGHT 100% |*****************************| 4735
</sect2>
<sect2 id="security-ssh-keygen">
<title>ssh-keygen</title>
<title><application>ssh-keygen</application></title>
<para>Instead of using passwords, &man.ssh-keygen.1; can
be used to generate DSA or RSA keys to authenticate a
@ -3356,7 +3356,7 @@ bb:48:db:f2:93:57:80:b6:aa:bc:f5:d5:ba:8f:79:17 user@host.example.com</screen>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="security-ssh-agent">
<title>ssh-agent and ssh-add</title>
<title><application>ssh-agent</application> and <application>ssh-add</application></title>
<para>The &man.ssh-agent.1; and &man.ssh-add.1; utilities
provide methods for <application>SSH</application> keys to
@ -3887,7 +3887,7 @@ You are advised to update or deinstall the affected package(s) immediately.</pro
to patch a system.</para>
<sect2>
<title>What does an advisory look like?</title>
<title>What Does an Advisory Look Like?</title>
<para>The &os; security advisories look similar to the one
below, taken from the &a.security-notifications.name;