diff --git a/data/applications.sgml b/data/applications.sgml index 080cca9e55..a7540aa50c 100644 --- a/data/applications.sgml +++ b/data/applications.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@

Experience the possibilities with FreeBSD

-

FreeBSD can handle nearly any task you'd expect of a UNIX workstation, +

FreeBSD can handle nearly any task you would expect of a UNIX workstation, as well as many you might not expect:

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ as well as many you might not expect:

is a true open system with full source code.
-

There's no doubt that so-called open systems are the requirement +

There is no doubt that so-called open systems are the requirement for today's computing applications. But no commercial vendor-supplied solution is more open than one which includes full source code to the entire operating system, including the kernel plus all of the system daemons, programs, @@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ thousands of applications.

Because FreeBSD is based on 4.4BSD, an industry-standard version of -UNIX, it's easy to compile and run programs. FreeBSD also includes an extensive +UNIX, it is easy to compile and run programs. FreeBSD also includes an extensive packages collection and ports collection that bring precompiled and easy-to-build software right to your desktop or enterprise -server. There's also a growing number of commercial +server. There is also a growing number of commercial applications written for FreeBSD.

Here are some examples of the environments in which FreeBSD is used:

@@ -97,10 +97,10 @@ so we can add it to our gallery. operating system that will grow with your needs.
-

Though FreeBSD is free software, it's also user supported software. +

Though FreeBSD is free software, it is also user supported software. Any questions you have can be posted to hundreds of FreeBSD developers and users simply by e-mailing to the -questions@freebsd.org mailing +freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG mailing list.

FreeBSD also has a worldwide group of programmers and writers who fix @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ systems are.

What experts have to say . . .

-

``FreeBSD handles [our] heavy load quite well and it's nothing short +

``FreeBSD handles [our] heavy load quite well and it is nothing short of amazing. Salutations to the FreeBSD team.''

---Mark Hittinger, administrator of WinNet Communications, diff --git a/data/availability.sgml b/data/availability.sgml index fdba1c34c0..fff75c2e10 100644 --- a/data/availability.sgml +++ b/data/availability.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ requirements.

FreeBSD requires a PC-type personal computer running with an Intel, AMD, Cyrix, or compatible 386, 486, or Pentium CPU. You computer needs -an ISA, EISA, VESA, or PCI bus. You'll also need 5 megabytes of RAM to +an ISA, EISA, VESA, or PCI bus. You will also need 5 megabytes of RAM to install FreeBSD (but 4 megabytes to run it after installation). For best performance, you should have 8 megabytes or more. 60MB of disk space is required for a minimal installation.

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Email: info@cdrom.com

In addition to FreeBSD, the CD-ROM comes with hundreds of ready-to-run -programs. It's backed by an unconditional money back guarantee.

+programs. It is backed by an unconditional money back guarantee.

About @@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ the FreeBSD Project.

FreeBSD is developed and supported by a worldwide team of programmers. -Jordan Hubbard, president of the project, +Jordan Hubbard, president of the project, has written a brief history of the FreeBSD project. Information about who's -responsible for what is also available. If you're curious, take a look +responsible for what is also available. If you are curious, take a look at some pictures of the team members. A more complete listing of contributors is available in the Contributors diff --git a/data/branch.sgml b/data/branch.sgml index 83c7e2e0f2..8ae7c2e409 100644 --- a/data/branch.sgml +++ b/data/branch.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ stratagems. :)

In summary:

    -
  • 2.1.6-RELEASE is aimed squarely at commercial users who don't need +
  • 2.1.6-RELEASE is aimed squarely at commercial users who do not need to be on the leading edge of development but favor things like stability and a long test-cycle instead. 2.1-STABLE has had only incremental refinements made to it since 2.1.5 was @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ released, and 2.1.6 will end what we feel to have been a very successful branch.

  • 2.2-RELEASE will begin introducing the more leading edge -technologies we've been developing over the year that +technologies we have been developing over the year that -stable has run in parallel, and will also be entering bug-fix mode after its release. Existing -stable customers will be encouraged to make the jump to 2.2-STABLE @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ it in before the release date.

    Many significant changes are planned for 3.0, and those interested in its development should subscribe to the freebsd-current mailing list (send mail to -majordomo@freebsd.org). +majordomo@FreeBSD.ORG).

As always, all branches of FreeBSD development are available @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ to your own machine (see the handbook) or browsed via the WEB. -

Please don't hesitate to use this valuable resource!

+

Please do not hesitate to use this valuable resource!

Note for CDROM customers: diff --git a/data/commercial.sgml b/data/commercial.sgml index 773149e0a2..a230713e6d 100644 --- a/data/commercial.sgml +++ b/data/commercial.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ us.

is set to run for a maximum of 2 concurrent users and 1,000 records. Please contact us at info@conetic.com - if you'd like a taste of even more power and + if you would like a taste of even more power and programming fun.

diff --git a/data/docproj.sgml b/data/docproj.sgml index 41872849b1..6c37fd3c61 100644 --- a/data/docproj.sgml +++ b/data/docproj.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ the discussion of documentation issues and communication among authors. Anyone wishing to contribute to materials or editorial time should subscribe by sending mail to majordomo@freebsd.org + href="mailto:majordomo@FreeBSD.ORG">majordomo@FreeBSD.ORG with a message body of:

subscribe freebsd-doc
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ href="ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/src/share/doc/handbook"> href="ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/src/share/doc/FAQ">ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/src/share/doc/FAQ

Diffs should be directed to doc@freebsd.org for + href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG for review.

Submitting new material

diff --git a/data/docs.sgml b/data/docs.sgml index fba58947f2..f82d7c7500 100644 --- a/data/docs.sgml +++ b/data/docs.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@

This is an evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. Please address comments and contributions to <doc@freebsd.org>. + href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG"><freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>.

&i.new; We now offer a Japanese translation of the handbook (EUC encoding).

diff --git a/data/features.sgml b/data/features.sgml index c46ce6dbc4..52460a2eea 100644 --- a/data/features.sgml +++ b/data/features.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ and the system administrator is freed from the task of tuning cache sizes.
  • Compatibility modules enable programs for other operating systems to run on FreeBSD, including programs for Linux, SCO, NetBSD, and BSDI. -

    Result: users won't have to recompile programs already compiled +

    Result: users will not have to recompile programs already compiled for one of the compatible OS's, and will have access to a greater selection of off-the-shelf software, like the Microsoft FrontPage Server diff --git a/data/includes.sgml b/data/includes.sgml index 24da4949f2..897e04ff5b 100644 --- a/data/includes.sgml +++ b/data/includes.sgml @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ -www@freebsd.org
    +www@FreeBSD.ORG
    ©right;'> + %includes; ]> - + @@ -90,8 +90,8 @@ Select a server near you:

    Copyright © 1995, 1996 FreeBSD Inc. All rights reserved.
    -www@freebsd.org
    -$Date: 1996-12-23 03:15:09 $ +www@FreeBSD.ORG
    +$Date: 1996-12-31 22:30:54 $
    About this server... diff --git a/data/internet.sgml b/data/internet.sgml index 4b293bce29..3797b45395 100644 --- a/data/internet.sgml +++ b/data/internet.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ package), making it a true "Intranet" networking solution.

    FreeBSD also handles TCP extensions like the RFC-1323 high performance extension and RFC-1644 -extension for transactions, plus SLIP and dial-on-demand PPP. It's an operating +extension for transactions, plus SLIP and dial-on-demand PPP. It is an operating system suitable for a home-based net surfer as well as a corporate systems administrator.

    • @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ of the companies that make use of FreeBSD every day:

  • Walnut Creek CD-ROM outside of San Francisco runs one of the most popular FTP servers on the net, one that supports 1200 simultaneous connections. Their server -is a single FreeBSD machine, transferring over 2 terabytes (yes that's +is a single FreeBSD machine, transferring over 2 terabytes (yes that is terabytes!) worth of files every month.
  • Yahoo Inc. runs the ultimate index @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ of the Internet, serving scads of daily net surfers with information about the World Wide Web. Yahoo, as well the companies that advertise on Yahoo, rely on FreeBSD to run reliable and responsive web servers.
    • -
  • If that's not enough, visit our Gallery +
  • If that is not enough, visit our Gallery of satisfied FreeBSD users.
    • @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ restrictions).

    Furthermore, the FreeBSD team is proactive in detecting and disseminating security information and bug reports with a -security officer and +security officer and ties to the Computer Emergency Response Team (CERT).

    diff --git a/data/mailto.sgml b/data/mailto.sgml index f195679682..30a764f497 100644 --- a/data/mailto.sgml +++ b/data/mailto.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -10,21 +10,21 @@

    Questions regarding this World Wide Web server should be addressed to www@freebsd.org.

    + href="mailto:www@FreeBSD.ORG">www@FreeBSD.ORG.

    Questions about the contents of this WWW server...

    Questions or suggestions about our documentation (Handbook, FAQ, Tutorials) should be addressed to doc@freebsd.org.

    + href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG.

    Questions about FreeBSD...

    Questions regarding FreeBSD should be addressed to questions@freebsd.org. + href="mailto:freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG. For general information about FreeBSD, send a message to - info@freebsd.org and + freebsd-info@FreeBSD.ORG and you will receive an automatic reply.

    &footer; diff --git a/data/mirror.sgml b/data/mirror.sgml index ac665f8c3c..1eae021021 100644 --- a/data/mirror.sgml +++ b/data/mirror.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ California time.

    Optimizing Rsync's Performance

    There are several gzipped tar files kept in the web hierarchy at -www.freebsd.org. Rsync doesn't deal with these very well; it +www.freebsd.org. Rsync does not deal with these very well; it must transmit each tar file if it is changed. Because these files can easily be created locally, you can get rsync to exclude them. To do this, run the following command as user `fred':

    @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ to be established.)

    More Information on Rsync

    -

    Now that you can use rsync, I'd suggest you read the +

    Now that you can use rsync, I would suggest you read the following files:

    @@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ Information page.

  • The system installation tool has been revamped with slightly different menu behavior and a number of bugs have been fixed. - It's hoped that this installation will be more intuitive for new + It is hoped that this installation will be more intuitive for new users than previous ones (feedback welcomed, of course).
  • Much miscellaneous cleanup work with the header files and sources. @@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Information page.

    the wd2 and wd3 entries in an effort to make things better seems to have only made them worse in the last SNAP. If this atapi.flp image works for you, great! - If not, I'm afraid that it's far too late to do + If not, I am afraid that it is far too late to do anything about at this stage so any failure reports will be simply filed for post-2.1 analysis. Sorry IDE CDROM hackers, but you had your chance!
    • @@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ Information page.

    re-released with several bug fixes:

    @@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ Information page.

  • The package installation menu now works.
  • All the auto-installation instrumentation - (installation by config file) now works. It's + (installation by config file) now works. It is possible to install everything from start to finish on a new system in a fully-automated fashion (if you install a lot of systems, this is a big help).
    • @@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ Information page.

    wcd0
    to your kernel configuration file, rebuilding the kernel and rebooting. Please let us know if you have problems by sending a message to bugs@freebsd.org. + href="mailto:freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG. @@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ Information page.

    href="releases/snapshots.html">Snapshot 950622 is now available. Bugs fixed and new features include:

    diff --git a/data/releases/snapshots.sgml b/data/releases/snapshots.sgml index 66375890b4..d3c9dbac5c 100644 --- a/data/releases/snapshots.sgml +++ b/data/releases/snapshots.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ out the door with problems that make folks mad, we are now periodically producing interim test releases called snapshots. These snapshots will be very similar to - full releases, except that they'll be somewhat more + full releases, except that they will be somewhat more minimal. In particular, before getting and installing a snapshot release, be aware of following: @@ -30,28 +30,28 @@ main distribution for each snapshot. It will only be changed on the boot floppies so that you know when the snapshot was made. These are not - releases, these are snapshots, and it's + releases, these are snapshots, and it is important that this distinction be preserved. People can and will, of course, refer to snapshots by date in mail - or netnews, we just don't want them to start thinking + or netnews, we just do not want them to start thinking that Christmas came early and the next release is already out!
  • Finally, we will not necessarily update the documentation. If a README still refers to a previous release, - well, that's much less important to than getting the + well, that is much less important to than getting the real bug fixes and new features out for testing. Complaints about that kind of thing will be quietly ignored. Again, these are snapshots, not releases!

    Your feedback on these snapshots is, of course, greatly - welcome. They're not just for our benefit - those who are + welcome. They are not just for our benefit - those who are coming to rely on FreeBSD for mission critical applications should welcome a chance to get at more updated bits in a structured fashion. You can also use these snapshots as tangible evidence that your feedback is - getting incorporated and that you (hopefully) won't have + getting incorporated and that you (hopefully) will not have any unpleasant surprises in the next release. On the other hand, if you do send us hate mail next release and it turns out that you never even tried the snapshots, well, it cuts both ways! diff --git a/data/searchhints.sgml b/data/searchhints.sgml index 6436021e34..6f0fb32672 100644 --- a/data/searchhints.sgml +++ b/data/searchhints.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ exclude any messages about ide quantum hard drives.

    • -

    If you don't think you got everything you should have...

    +

    If you do not think you received everything you should have...

    1. If one of your keywords has variant forms, be sure to diff --git a/data/support.sgml b/data/support.sgml index 07d559df6a..8005e5b61b 100644 --- a/data/support.sgml +++ b/data/support.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ users, with numerous mailing list covering different topic areas. When in doubt about what list to post a question to, post to questions@freebsd.org. + href="mailto:freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG. You can search the mailing list archives at www.freebsd.org.

      @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@

      Problem reports may also be submitted to the development team using the send-pr(1) command on a FreeBSD system or by sending an email - message to bugs@freebsd.org. + message to freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG. Please note that send-pr is preferred since messages sent to the mailing list are not tracked as official problem reports! diff --git a/data/tutorials/index.sgml b/data/tutorials/index.sgml index 6b41bfb80b..c5b3c226eb 100644 --- a/data/tutorials/index.sgml +++ b/data/tutorials/index.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@

      Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD, FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or would like to contribute a document, please contact us at - doc@FreeBSD.org.

      + freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org.

      • For People New to Both FreeBSD and Unix diff --git a/data/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml b/data/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml index 9f63e518ca..e63d0acfb5 100644 --- a/data/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml +++ b/data/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ - +
        For People New to Both FreeBSD and Unix @@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ You might especially want to make a file from /sbin/dmesg by typing and copying dmesg.txt to the floppy. /sbin/dmesg is the boot log record, and it's useful to understand it because it shows what FreeBSD found -when it booted up. If you ask questions on questions@freebsd.org or on +when it booted up. If you ask questions on freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG or on a USENET group—like ``FreeBSD isn't finding my tape drive, what do I do?''—people will want to know what dmesg has to say. diff --git a/data/welcome.sgml b/data/welcome.sgml index 538fd761d7..cde67f6f80 100644 --- a/data/welcome.sgml +++ b/data/welcome.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ can run a variety of applications.

        The quality of FreeBSD combined with today's low-cost, high-speed PC hardware makes FreeBSD a very economical alternative to commercial UNIX workstations. -It's suited for a great number of applications.

        +It is suited for a great number of applications.

        FreeBSD @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ is free.

        While you might expect an operating system with these features to sell for a high price, FreeBSD is available free of charge and comes with full -source code. If you'd like to try it out, more +source code. If you would like to try it out, more information is available.

        &footer; diff --git a/en/applications.sgml b/en/applications.sgml index 080cca9e55..a7540aa50c 100644 --- a/en/applications.sgml +++ b/en/applications.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@

        Experience the possibilities with FreeBSD

        -

        FreeBSD can handle nearly any task you'd expect of a UNIX workstation, +

        FreeBSD can handle nearly any task you would expect of a UNIX workstation, as well as many you might not expect:

        @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ as well as many you might not expect:

        is a true open system with full source code.
        -

        There's no doubt that so-called open systems are the requirement +

        There is no doubt that so-called open systems are the requirement for today's computing applications. But no commercial vendor-supplied solution is more open than one which includes full source code to the entire operating system, including the kernel plus all of the system daemons, programs, @@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ thousands of applications.

        Because FreeBSD is based on 4.4BSD, an industry-standard version of -UNIX, it's easy to compile and run programs. FreeBSD also includes an extensive +UNIX, it is easy to compile and run programs. FreeBSD also includes an extensive packages collection and ports collection that bring precompiled and easy-to-build software right to your desktop or enterprise -server. There's also a growing number of commercial +server. There is also a growing number of commercial applications written for FreeBSD.

        Here are some examples of the environments in which FreeBSD is used:

        @@ -97,10 +97,10 @@ so we can add it to our gallery.
        • operating system that will grow with your needs.
        -

        Though FreeBSD is free software, it's also user supported software. +

        Though FreeBSD is free software, it is also user supported software. Any questions you have can be posted to hundreds of FreeBSD developers and users simply by e-mailing to the -questions@freebsd.org mailing +freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG mailing list.

        FreeBSD also has a worldwide group of programmers and writers who fix @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ systems are.

        What experts have to say . . .

        -

        ``FreeBSD handles [our] heavy load quite well and it's nothing short +

        ``FreeBSD handles [our] heavy load quite well and it is nothing short of amazing. Salutations to the FreeBSD team.''

        ---Mark Hittinger, administrator of WinNet Communications, diff --git a/en/availability.sgml b/en/availability.sgml index fdba1c34c0..fff75c2e10 100644 --- a/en/availability.sgml +++ b/en/availability.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ requirements.

        FreeBSD requires a PC-type personal computer running with an Intel, AMD, Cyrix, or compatible 386, 486, or Pentium CPU. You computer needs -an ISA, EISA, VESA, or PCI bus. You'll also need 5 megabytes of RAM to +an ISA, EISA, VESA, or PCI bus. You will also need 5 megabytes of RAM to install FreeBSD (but 4 megabytes to run it after installation). For best performance, you should have 8 megabytes or more. 60MB of disk space is required for a minimal installation.

        @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Email: info@cdrom.com

        In addition to FreeBSD, the CD-ROM comes with hundreds of ready-to-run -programs. It's backed by an unconditional money back guarantee.

        +programs. It is backed by an unconditional money back guarantee.

        About @@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ the FreeBSD Project.

        FreeBSD is developed and supported by a worldwide team of programmers. -Jordan Hubbard, president of the project, +Jordan Hubbard, president of the project, has written a brief history of the FreeBSD project. Information about who's -responsible for what is also available. If you're curious, take a look +responsible for what is also available. If you are curious, take a look at some pictures of the team members. A more complete listing of contributors is available in the Contributors diff --git a/en/branch.sgml b/en/branch.sgml index 83c7e2e0f2..8ae7c2e409 100644 --- a/en/branch.sgml +++ b/en/branch.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ stratagems. :)

        In summary:

          -
        • 2.1.6-RELEASE is aimed squarely at commercial users who don't need +
        • 2.1.6-RELEASE is aimed squarely at commercial users who do not need to be on the leading edge of development but favor things like stability and a long test-cycle instead. 2.1-STABLE has had only incremental refinements made to it since 2.1.5 was @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ released, and 2.1.6 will end what we feel to have been a very successful branch.

        • 2.2-RELEASE will begin introducing the more leading edge -technologies we've been developing over the year that +technologies we have been developing over the year that -stable has run in parallel, and will also be entering bug-fix mode after its release. Existing -stable customers will be encouraged to make the jump to 2.2-STABLE @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ it in before the release date.

          Many significant changes are planned for 3.0, and those interested in its development should subscribe to the freebsd-current mailing list (send mail to -majordomo@freebsd.org). +majordomo@FreeBSD.ORG).

        As always, all branches of FreeBSD development are available @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ to your own machine (see the handbook) or browsed via the WEB. -

        Please don't hesitate to use this valuable resource!

        +

        Please do not hesitate to use this valuable resource!

        Note for CDROM customers: diff --git a/en/commercial/commercial.sgml b/en/commercial/commercial.sgml index 773149e0a2..a230713e6d 100644 --- a/en/commercial/commercial.sgml +++ b/en/commercial/commercial.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ us.

        is set to run for a maximum of 2 concurrent users and 1,000 records. Please contact us at info@conetic.com - if you'd like a taste of even more power and + if you would like a taste of even more power and programming fun.

        diff --git a/en/docproj/docproj.sgml b/en/docproj/docproj.sgml index 41872849b1..6c37fd3c61 100644 --- a/en/docproj/docproj.sgml +++ b/en/docproj/docproj.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ the discussion of documentation issues and communication among authors. Anyone wishing to contribute to materials or editorial time should subscribe by sending mail to majordomo@freebsd.org + href="mailto:majordomo@FreeBSD.ORG">majordomo@FreeBSD.ORG with a message body of:

        subscribe freebsd-doc
        @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ href="ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/src/share/doc/handbook"> href="ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/src/share/doc/FAQ">ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/src/share/doc/FAQ

        Diffs should be directed to doc@freebsd.org for + href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG for review.

        Submitting new material

        diff --git a/en/docs.sgml b/en/docs.sgml index fba58947f2..f82d7c7500 100644 --- a/en/docs.sgml +++ b/en/docs.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@

        This is an evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. Please address comments and contributions to <doc@freebsd.org>. + href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG"><freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>.

        &i.new; We now offer a Japanese translation of the handbook (EUC encoding).

        diff --git a/en/features.sgml b/en/features.sgml index c46ce6dbc4..52460a2eea 100644 --- a/en/features.sgml +++ b/en/features.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ and the system administrator is freed from the task of tuning cache sizes.
      • Compatibility modules enable programs for other operating systems to run on FreeBSD, including programs for Linux, SCO, NetBSD, and BSDI. -

        Result: users won't have to recompile programs already compiled +

        Result: users will not have to recompile programs already compiled for one of the compatible OS's, and will have access to a greater selection of off-the-shelf software, like the Microsoft FrontPage Server diff --git a/en/includes.sgml b/en/includes.sgml index 24da4949f2..897e04ff5b 100644 --- a/en/includes.sgml +++ b/en/includes.sgml @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ -www@freebsd.org
        +www@FreeBSD.ORG
        ©right;'> + %includes; ]> - + @@ -90,8 +90,8 @@ Select a server near you:

        Copyright © 1995, 1996 FreeBSD Inc. All rights reserved.
        -www@freebsd.org
        -$Date: 1996-12-23 03:15:09 $ +www@FreeBSD.ORG
        +$Date: 1996-12-31 22:30:54 $
        About this server... diff --git a/en/internal/mirror.sgml b/en/internal/mirror.sgml index ac665f8c3c..1eae021021 100644 --- a/en/internal/mirror.sgml +++ b/en/internal/mirror.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ California time.

        Optimizing Rsync's Performance

        There are several gzipped tar files kept in the web hierarchy at -www.freebsd.org. Rsync doesn't deal with these very well; it +www.freebsd.org. Rsync does not deal with these very well; it must transmit each tar file if it is changed. Because these files can easily be created locally, you can get rsync to exclude them. To do this, run the following command as user `fred':

        @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ to be established.)

        More Information on Rsync

        -

        Now that you can use rsync, I'd suggest you read the +

        Now that you can use rsync, I would suggest you read the following files:

          diff --git a/en/internet.sgml b/en/internet.sgml index 4b293bce29..3797b45395 100644 --- a/en/internet.sgml +++ b/en/internet.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ package), making it a true "Intranet" networking solution.

          FreeBSD also handles TCP extensions like the RFC-1323 high performance extension and RFC-1644 -extension for transactions, plus SLIP and dial-on-demand PPP. It's an operating +extension for transactions, plus SLIP and dial-on-demand PPP. It is an operating system suitable for a home-based net surfer as well as a corporate systems administrator.

        • @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ of the companies that make use of FreeBSD every day:

      • Walnut Creek CD-ROM outside of San Francisco runs one of the most popular FTP servers on the net, one that supports 1200 simultaneous connections. Their server -is a single FreeBSD machine, transferring over 2 terabytes (yes that's +is a single FreeBSD machine, transferring over 2 terabytes (yes that is terabytes!) worth of files every month.
      • Yahoo Inc. runs the ultimate index @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ of the Internet, serving scads of daily net surfers with information about the World Wide Web. Yahoo, as well the companies that advertise on Yahoo, rely on FreeBSD to run reliable and responsive web servers.
        • -
      • If that's not enough, visit our Gallery +
      • If that is not enough, visit our Gallery of satisfied FreeBSD users.
      @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ restrictions).

      Furthermore, the FreeBSD team is proactive in detecting and disseminating security information and bug reports with a -security officer and +security officer and ties to the Computer Emergency Response Team (CERT).

      diff --git a/en/mailto.sgml b/en/mailto.sgml index f195679682..30a764f497 100644 --- a/en/mailto.sgml +++ b/en/mailto.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -10,21 +10,21 @@

      Questions regarding this World Wide Web server should be addressed to www@freebsd.org.

      + href="mailto:www@FreeBSD.ORG">www@FreeBSD.ORG.

      Questions about the contents of this WWW server...

      Questions or suggestions about our documentation (Handbook, FAQ, Tutorials) should be addressed to doc@freebsd.org.

      + href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG.

      Questions about FreeBSD...

      Questions regarding FreeBSD should be addressed to questions@freebsd.org. + href="mailto:freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG. For general information about FreeBSD, send a message to - info@freebsd.org and + freebsd-info@FreeBSD.ORG and you will receive an automatic reply.

      &footer; diff --git a/en/news/newsflash.sgml b/en/news/newsflash.sgml index 35c0bc69bc..065c69b437 100644 --- a/en/news/newsflash.sgml +++ b/en/news/newsflash.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ Information page.

      genuinely useful after installation time (though still missing a man page - urk!).
      2. -
    2. Basically, lots-o-fixes. If you're trying to use the 2.2 SNAPs +
    3. Basically, lots-o-fixes. If you are trying to use the 2.2 SNAPs in more serious applications, please upgrade to this version.
      4. @@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ Information page.

    4. The system installation tool has been revamped with slightly different menu behavior and a number of bugs have been fixed. - It's hoped that this installation will be more intuitive for new + It is hoped that this installation will be more intuitive for new users than previous ones (feedback welcomed, of course).
    5. Much miscellaneous cleanup work with the header files and sources. @@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Information page.

      the wd2 and wd3 entries in an effort to make things better seems to have only made them worse in the last SNAP. If this atapi.flp image works for you, great! - If not, I'm afraid that it's far too late to do + If not, I am afraid that it is far too late to do anything about at this stage so any failure reports will be simply filed for post-2.1 analysis. Sorry IDE CDROM hackers, but you had your chance!
      6. @@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ Information page.

      re-released with several bug fixes:

        -
      • Atapi boot floppy now assumes it's alone by itself +
      • Atapi boot floppy now assumes it is alone by itself on the second IDE controller - this seems to work a lot better for most folks who were provided with dedicated controllers when they purchased their IDE @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ Information page.

        with boot.flp and build a custom kernel or something.
      • The apache WEB server installation makes fewer assumptions about - where you'll be putting things.
        • + where you will be putting things.
      • Installing the secure dist no longer requires that you also install Kerberos in order to get things like telnet to work.
        • @@ -288,15 +288,15 @@ Information page.

      • sysinstall seems to croak in certain situations if you run it after the system is installed.
        • -
      • The FTP retry code still isn't 100% there - - apparently it now doesn't handle reselection very - well. Sigh. I'm so truly sick of looking at that +
      • The FTP retry code still is not 100% there - + apparently it now does not handle reselection very + well. Sigh. I am so truly sick of looking at that part of the code that if somebody else wanted to have - a look, I wouldn't fight them off! It seems like + a look, I would not fight them off! It seems like every time I fix one thing, I break something else.
      • The media selection screen protects itself from - re-entry in some situations when you'd really like it + re-entry in some situations when you would really like it to be allowed. Whoops!
      • Using more than one FreeBSD ``slice'' can cause problems.
      @@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ Information page.

    6. The package installation menu now works.
    7. All the auto-installation instrumentation - (installation by config file) now works. It's + (installation by config file) now works. It is possible to install everything from start to finish on a new system in a fully-automated fashion (if you install a lot of systems, this is a big help).
      8. @@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ Information page.

      wcd0 to your kernel configuration file, rebuilding the kernel and rebooting. Please let us know if you have problems by sending a message to bugs@freebsd.org. + href="mailto:freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG. @@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ Information page.

      href="releases/snapshots.html">Snapshot 950622 is now available. Bugs fixed and new features include:

        -
      • SLIP installation didn't ``ifconfig sl0'' +
      • SLIP installation did not ``ifconfig sl0'' properly.
      • It was not possible to do certain operations @@ -423,13 +423,13 @@ Information page.

        replacement for the previous release and is aimed at new users installing the system from scratch. Still no update mechanism yet, but there are rumors of a project - being formed to deal with this soon. If you've any + being formed to deal with this soon. If you have any interest in being part of it, then please send mail to - hackers@freebsd.org. - I'll also be getting involved in the whole update - mechanism issue since it's been a gaping hole for far - too long now and I'd like to see a solution sooner - rather than later. I'm sure that many of our users + freebsd-hackers@FreeBSD.ORG. + I will also be getting involved in the whole update + mechanism issue since it has been a gaping hole for far + too long now and I would like to see a solution sooner + rather than later. I am sure that many of our users feel the same way!

        • @@ -492,7 +492,7 @@ Information page.

        in the same directory as the snapshot release. The file should be placed in /usr/lib once you have installed the release. -
      • The hostname still isn't being set properly in +
      • The hostname still is not being set properly in /etc/sysconfig for some reason - you should edit this file after the initial installation and customize it for your system. The comments in the file should @@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ Information page.

        arrow/travel keys to move around in your scroll-back buffer.
      • NIS (YP) support for FreeBSD as server and client.
      • First cut at on-demand ppp dialing. Docs still in - Japanese, but we're working on that! See /usr/bin/ppp + Japanese, but we are working on that! See /usr/bin/ppp for more details.
      • IP Firewall code much improved
      • AHA294x controller support now added
        • @@ -602,7 +602,7 @@ Information page.

        Sorry.
      • Lots of changes to the installation - hopefully this one even mostly works for once.
        • -
      • A billion other things I've forgotten for now but will +
      • A billion other things I have forgotten for now but will remember right after I save this document.
      diff --git a/en/releases/snapshots.sgml b/en/releases/snapshots.sgml index 66375890b4..d3c9dbac5c 100644 --- a/en/releases/snapshots.sgml +++ b/en/releases/snapshots.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ out the door with problems that make folks mad, we are now periodically producing interim test releases called snapshots. These snapshots will be very similar to - full releases, except that they'll be somewhat more + full releases, except that they will be somewhat more minimal. In particular, before getting and installing a snapshot release, be aware of following: @@ -30,28 +30,28 @@ main distribution for each snapshot. It will only be changed on the boot floppies so that you know when the snapshot was made. These are not - releases, these are snapshots, and it's + releases, these are snapshots, and it is important that this distinction be preserved. People can and will, of course, refer to snapshots by date in mail - or netnews, we just don't want them to start thinking + or netnews, we just do not want them to start thinking that Christmas came early and the next release is already out!
    8. Finally, we will not necessarily update the documentation. If a README still refers to a previous release, - well, that's much less important to than getting the + well, that is much less important to than getting the real bug fixes and new features out for testing. Complaints about that kind of thing will be quietly ignored. Again, these are snapshots, not releases!

      Your feedback on these snapshots is, of course, greatly - welcome. They're not just for our benefit - those who are + welcome. They are not just for our benefit - those who are coming to rely on FreeBSD for mission critical applications should welcome a chance to get at more updated bits in a structured fashion. You can also use these snapshots as tangible evidence that your feedback is - getting incorporated and that you (hopefully) won't have + getting incorporated and that you (hopefully) will not have any unpleasant surprises in the next release. On the other hand, if you do send us hate mail next release and it turns out that you never even tried the snapshots, well, it cuts both ways! diff --git a/en/search/searchhints.sgml b/en/search/searchhints.sgml index 6436021e34..6f0fb32672 100644 --- a/en/search/searchhints.sgml +++ b/en/search/searchhints.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ + %includes; ]> @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ exclude any messages about ide quantum hard drives.

    -

    If you don't think you got everything you should have...

    +

    If you do not think you received everything you should have...

    1. If one of your keywords has variant forms, be sure to diff --git a/en/support.sgml b/en/support.sgml index 07d559df6a..8005e5b61b 100644 --- a/en/support.sgml +++ b/en/support.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ users, with numerous mailing list covering different topic areas. When in doubt about what list to post a question to, post to questions@freebsd.org. + href="mailto:freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG. You can search the mailing list archives at www.freebsd.org.

      @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@

      Problem reports may also be submitted to the development team using the send-pr(1) command on a FreeBSD system or by sending an email - message to bugs@freebsd.org. + message to freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG. Please note that send-pr is preferred since messages sent to the mailing list are not tracked as official problem reports! diff --git a/en/usergroups.sgml b/en/usergroups.sgml index 552af15fa1..03fba468ab 100644 --- a/en/usergroups.sgml +++ b/en/usergroups.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ users, with numerous mailing list covering different topic areas. When in doubt about what list to post a question to, post to questions@freebsd.org. + href="mailto:freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG. You can search the mailing list archives at www.freebsd.org.

      @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@

      Problem reports may also be submitted to the development team using the send-pr(1) command on a FreeBSD system or by sending an email - message to bugs@freebsd.org. + message to freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG. Please note that send-pr is preferred since messages sent to the mailing list are not tracked as official problem reports! diff --git a/en/welcome.sgml b/en/welcome.sgml index 538fd761d7..cde67f6f80 100644 --- a/en/welcome.sgml +++ b/en/welcome.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; ]> @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ can run a variety of applications.

      The quality of FreeBSD combined with today's low-cost, high-speed PC hardware makes FreeBSD a very economical alternative to commercial UNIX workstations. -It's suited for a great number of applications.

      +It is suited for a great number of applications.

      FreeBSD @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ is free.

      While you might expect an operating system with these features to sell for a high price, FreeBSD is available free of charge and comes with full -source code. If you'd like to try it out, more +source code. If you would like to try it out, more information is available.

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